Free Trip; Footle (2)

Pride's fall
Sin's call
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 26, 2010 at 5:57 PM
So much truth in your words. I think most will relate to this one. If it is for the contest, best wishes. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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June 26, 2010 at 4:14 AM
That is what gets us in most of the trouble..Sara
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June 25, 2010 at 9:06 AM
Ah, and now we do have the true footle with the same powerful message. Great work, Virginia, and best wishes in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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June 25, 2010 at 7:04 AM
The best to you in the contest should you enter it Virginia. Love, Carol
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June 25, 2010 at 4:54 AM
ooh, nice. I really like this. Best Regards Paul
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