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Free Trip; Footle

Fallen pride
Sin's stride

light verse

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Carolyn Devonshire

June 25, 2010 at 9:05 AM

It may not be a "true footle" as you said below, but I DO appreciate the message, Virginia. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

June 25, 2010 at 5:27 AM

I am enjoying reading the diverse poetry presented here today. I wish you a weekend of good health, love, and inspiration. The best to you always in your endeavors Virginia. Love, Carol

Virginia Mitchell

June 25, 2010 at 4:17 AM

Thank you, Doris, and Robert; and all others that comment here... I just realized this is not a true Footle because of the syllable count in the first line. In a Footle, there are only two syllables per line...This has been revised with "Free Trip; Footle (2)"

Doris Culverhouse

June 24, 2010 at 5:28 PM

good one!!

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