Free To Roam

A warship she is, this ship of gray, 
Underway, underway, making way. 
The decks vibrate, the tone, the sound, 
Un-der-way-un-der-way, the pistons pound. 

On the horizon stands a singular mast, 
Un-der-way-un-der-way, make her fast. 
Increase her speed, begin the turn, 
Un-der-way-UN-DER-WAY, prop and churn! 

Balanced and deadly the guns do slew, 
UN-DER-WAY-UN-DER-WAY, the radars too. 
Fire first one, then pour on the rounds, 
UN-DER-WAY-UN-DER-WAY, competing sounds! 

Blast and shards upon the bow, 
Into the waves strike and plow, 
UN-DER-WAY-UN-DER-WAY, welds and steel. 
UN-DER-WAY-UN-DER-WAY, man on keel. 

UN-DER-WAY-UN-DER-WAY, oil n’ fire. 
UN-DER-WAY-UN-DER-WAY, smoke n’ ire. 
On the horizon the mast a tilting, 
Over the side the splashes wilting. 

Now all alone is this warship’s sound. 
Un-der-way-un-der-way, the pistons pound. 
Turn hard then steady, away from home. 
Underway, underway, my ocean to roam.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/12/2021 12:25:00 PM
You capture the cacophony of the warship! Congratulations!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 11/12/2021 11:57:00 PM
Kim, thanks and i wish yoiu fair winds and following seas
Date: 11/12/2021 10:50:00 AM
Un-der-way-un-der-way! Fantastic rhythm along with experience words in the realm of ships on the sea. Thank you for bringing us underway with this warship. Congrats on your placement.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 11/12/2021 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, I wish yoiu fair winds and following seas
Date: 11/11/2021 10:33:00 PM
Beautiful writing on Pitch and Roll. Congratulations!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 11/12/2021 10:56:00 AM
Thanks, I wish you fair winds and following seas
Date: 11/12/2018 3:46:00 PM
I enjoyed the rhythm of this fun poem.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 11/13/2018 4:49:00 AM
Thanks Kim! I am an old navy and only hope I ca be in tune with the rhythm of the sea.
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