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Free To Face My God

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[ credits to LAURENT YVAN from France who read my poem ] "Though I freely walk these streets, sometimes I'm mentally confined Yesterday, today and tomorrow seem forever entwined When I think I'm moving forward somebody pushes rewind Gone are the bars in the windows, but not the bars in my mind" -RhymaRhyma
they cut me loose free to roam about the earth a castaway a loner me with my troubled thoughts my shame and my regrets cursed with a past that haunts me a shadow I simply cannot shake the constant nagging reminder of my remorse my burden the debt I’ll never be able to repay so I wander and let time try to heal the broken man that I’ve become guiding me down secluded paths far from everything and everyone where I seek nature to face my god shedding the weight of layers at his mercy
AP: Honorable Mention 2020, Honorable Mention 2025 Read on air by invitation ~ September 4, 2020 'LATE NIGHT POETS' Submitted on August 13, 2020 for contest STRAND COMPLETELY NEW (22) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - RANKED 1ST

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Date: 5/11/2021 5:28:00 PM
Line, wonderful reading by your friend, and your poem is excellent, your talent is showing itself in beautiful ways, love _Constance
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Date: 5/11/2021 5:32:00 PM
Thank you very much, Constance ~ most appreciated
Date: 8/16/2020 11:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your 1st place win in Brian's contest. Perfect for the contest. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/16/2020 7:59:00 PM
Thank you very much, Eve ~
Date: 8/16/2020 1:01:00 AM
Superb! “shedding the weight of layers at his mercy”
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Date: 8/16/2020 2:13:00 AM
Thank you for your much appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 8/15/2020 11:47:00 PM
Soul searching and truly felt....Congrats.
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Date: 8/16/2020 2:13:00 AM
Thank you, Carol ~
Date: 8/14/2020 7:05:00 AM
Nicely done! Great emotion.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 8/16/2020 2:14:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated ~
Date: 8/13/2020 3:58:00 PM
heartfelt and so sad,sometimes the broken can be mended,wishing you all the best...
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Date: 8/13/2020 7:42:00 PM
sad for anyone living in this much regret and pain ~ I suspect that is the story for many people who end up homeless.

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