Free To Disagree. Inspired By ' Free To Be Me."

There was this pristine poetess
who signed off: " Light and Love."
with the rocket plunge of osprey
and the soft cadence of a dove.

She grips each adverb tightly
measures out the slightest verb.
" You really need to think this out."
" Oh, You must be from the 'burb."

She rails at broken rhyme schemes.
She despises gauche haiku.
She does all this defending ART:
that excludes this one by you.

She is up and down each contest.
" They don't appreciate my style!"
Such is the life of a feisty Muse.
as she leaves you with a smile.

Now she's working out another,
yet before she says: " Goodbye!"
" I think that last line's off a bit"
" and now let me tell you why!"



I went to the source, as it were. I imagine sulfur in my Soup Mail tonight...
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Dietrich Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 12:45 PM
hahaha. good one for her contest!! congrats. LUv, Andrea
Brown Avatar
July 30, 2010 at 5:26 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your win in Deborah Guzzi's contest "Critcise Me". Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 10:28 PM
Congratulations, gerard on your success in Deborah's contest, Agape, Moses
Richards Avatar
July 29, 2010 at 6:30 PM
I loved this one, when first spied it!! So glad to see it in the winner's circle...congratulations, Gerard!!
Richards Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 8:37 AM
You have nailed it, Gerard!!! Love every line....our "Light and Love" is indeed filled with both enlightenment....and lovliness....and fiesty to the core!! She will love this too...just know it!!
Culverhouse Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 7:01 AM
funny!!
Guzzi Avatar
July 24, 2010 at 5:12 AM
You are soooooooo cool and right! LOL but WHY???? I want it to have an ending....tell me why! Light & Love (duck)
Gorelick Avatar
July 23, 2010 at 7:49 PM
Oh my, I want to be a fly on the wall when she reads this..just kidding..she'll love it..BG
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