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Day too long been pilin' up
so when you smile me up
and down to my bones
ta hell with the phones and loans

groans and moans trump hands down.
Where ya been, outa town?
Who cares those eyes, oh my
pecs and gluts, ceps and thighs...

enfold me embrace me
hold on tight and face me
naked as you are in
unabashed tenderness

tongue flicks enmeshed with
grips kneading our flesh
in togetherness despite all
we feel at one with god's

creation.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/5/2011 10:49:00 PM
;-) CONGRATULATIONS, ON YOUR WIN~ Have a wonderful weekend, GOD BLESS,..p.d.
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Date: 11/3/2011 6:11:00 PM
You're hot stuff. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Frank's "Erotica" contest Nancy. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/2/2011 10:10:00 AM
super congrats Nancy on another big win luv..
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Date: 10/26/2011 8:25:00 AM
bold and uninhibited is this write..enjoyed..thnks for sharing
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Date: 10/26/2011 5:03:00 AM
Is It getting hot in here? Tony
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Date: 10/26/2011 4:36:00 AM
Surely the (PS wise) reviews will be intense with this write dear poet ! Have a fantastic week Nancy....much love, james
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Date: 10/25/2011 11:28:00 PM
Is it for Frank's contest? NICE.
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Date: 10/25/2011 8:53:00 PM
wow Nancy .. luv this greeting when that special someone enters the doorway.. luv the references to body parts ..awesome write..luv.. good luck if for any contest.. it is erotica luv..
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