Michael Jordan Poet Sonnet

Free Spirit

There are things I’ll never be
  Things that I’ll never know
    Places that I’ll never see
    Seeds that I’ll never sow

      But I reckon that’s ok
     I reckon it’s just as well
      For I now live in today
     Breaking addictions spell

     I’m happy with who I am
       I’m happy with my life
      For the Lord I’m a lamb
       A husband to my wife

What has truly set my spirit free?
I accepted Jesus Christ unto me

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Danielle Moreno February 27, 2009 at 5:15 PM great job on your poem...........................................................danielle

Robin L. Gass February 13, 2009 at 10:20 AM A beautiful sonnet that reflects the beauty of the writers soul. Wonderful, uplifting write, Michael! GBY Love, Robin

Brian Strand February 12, 2009 at 8:02 AM You are indeed Michael.Rgds & thanks for your welcome comments

Michaela Payne January 26, 2009 at 9:04 PM Michael this is absolutely beautiful, every word was wonderfully written. A free spirit you are. Blessings, ~Michaela~

John Tanaskow January 26, 2009 at 3:46 AM and yet it crippled me.

Ronald Bingham January 25, 2009 at 12:41 PM All we have to do is ask. Blessings, Ron

Kristin Reynolds January 25, 2009 at 3:39 AM Amaen, Michael, and you are the most blessed of all, for all of these things, amazing heart and soul you've g0t my dear, love, Kristin

Janetta Harrington January 24, 2009 at 9:54 PM michael, thanks for your comment. i guess sometimes we just have to blow off steam. i too know Jesus and i know he will help. you are a good guy and i really like your writings. i probably should complain in a diarly. i just want to get well so fast. janetta

Corinne Curcio January 24, 2009 at 2:23 PM Wonderful!

Sean Kelly January 24, 2009 at 8:39 AM Well presented , Free Spirit .....

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson January 24, 2009 at 8:02 AM this is very spiritual-great write ichael, I love reading your poems-Have not gotten to them all yet but your poems are from the HEART!-also thanks so much for letting me know about the correction I needed to make in Harmony!!!God Bless-Rhonda Hero

Brian Strand January 24, 2009 at 8:02 AM Hi Michael ,Thank you for your kind words.My contest is for the English Sonnet form 10 syllables per line ,14 lines including the final couplet.Rgds Brian

Sharon Winter January 24, 2009 at 7:49 AM Dearest Michael, an open, honest, personal and well written Sonnet from your heart of hearts. Spiritual, and filled with well deserved pride. So proud of you too, like everyone else is. So happy for your inner peace and joy, and so thankful you can share with your amazing poetry. Love you, Shar YF4L

Christopher Higgins January 24, 2009 at 7:14 AM Brother your stories are something to be heard. Thanks for commenting on my work.

Nigel Fawcett January 24, 2009 at 7:12 AM Such a beautiful spiritual write, Michael. I loved this very much. Nigel

Carrie Richards January 24, 2009 at 7:07 AM God Bless who you are today, Michael. Awesome poem...!! Beautiful sentiment! ~ Love, Carrie

Christopher Higgins January 24, 2009 at 7:03 AM The poem coks Michael. The message of being happy, content no matter all the past failures is evident in this piece. Great write.