William Kelii Kekaula Poet Lay

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Free Souls

In full abandon to splendor,
We immerse in sweet surrender,
For the time to be just somewhere,
When we breathe the words by Voltaire.

To stroll the pathways of free souls,
Advance concepts of righteous goals,
Detachment from church and the state,
And learned traits firsthand on our plate.


2019 December 27
LAY It On Me - 8x8 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: charles messina


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8 lines x 8 syllables per = 64 syllables total

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Eve Roper January 16, 2020 at 10:31 PM Beautiful verse, William, congratulations your win. Eve William Kelii Kekaula January 16, 2020 at 11:25 PM Thanks indeed Eve!~@wk

Charles Messina January 16, 2020 at 8:08 AM Great poem, William. Very nicely written. Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie William Kelii Kekaula January 16, 2020 at 8:49 AM Thank you so very much, Charles, for another inspiring contest~@wk

Constance La France December 28, 2019 at 10:42 AM William, nicely penned, best of luck in the contest... Constance William Kelii Kekaula December 28, 2019 at 10:56 AM Happy New Years and many thanks to you and your family ~ Aloha always William

Caren Krutsinger December 28, 2019 at 12:06 AM "To stroll the pathways of free souls," - this line in itself is poetry pure and true. William Kelii Kekaula December 28, 2019 at 6:06 AM Many thanks for your kind thoughts Caren and a Happy New Year to you and your family ~ Aloha always William