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In full abandon to splendor, We immerse in sweet surrender, For the time to be just somewhere, When we breathe the words by Voltaire. To stroll the pathways of free souls, Advance concepts of righteous goals, Detachment from church and the state, And learned traits firsthand on our plate. 2019 December 27 LAY It On Me - 8x8 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: charles messina RhymingScheme; aa bb cc dd Howmanysyllables; 8 lines x 8 syllables per = 64 syllables total

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Date: 1/16/2020 10:31:00 PM
Beautiful verse, William, congratulations your win. Eve
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Date: 1/16/2020 11:25:00 PM
Thanks indeed Eve!~@wk
Date: 1/16/2020 8:08:00 AM
Great poem, William. Very nicely written. Congratulations on your win! Blessings ~Charlie
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Date: 1/16/2020 8:49:00 AM
Thank you so very much, Charles, for another inspiring contest~@wk
Date: 12/28/2019 10:42:00 AM
William, nicely penned, best of luck in the contest... Constance
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Date: 12/28/2019 10:56:00 AM
Happy New Years and many thanks to you and your family ~ Aloha always William
Date: 12/28/2019 12:06:00 AM
"To stroll the pathways of free souls," - this line in itself is poetry pure and true.
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Date: 12/28/2019 6:06:00 AM
Many thanks for your kind thoughts Caren and a Happy New Year to you and your family ~ Aloha always William

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