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Free Love Take Some

Proclaimed the poster stapled to the side of the old barn, its bold, bright colors in stark contrast to the faded paint of the cladding. The tear-off tabs hanging below the poster, each with a bright pink heart upon it, flutter in the hot desert wind. Some had already been taken, leaving empty gaps, like missing piano keys, a tune never to be played again. Love G - Give me a new poem- any form - Poetry Contest Placed 3rd Sponsored by: Constance La France Date wrote: 1st March 2022

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/1/2022 10:27:00 PM

Congratulations on first place! "Some had already been taken, leaving empty gaps, like missing piano keys," This is great!

Terry Miller
Date: 4/2/2022 6:06:00 AM

Thank you so much Caren I really do appreciate your comments, have a great day, Terry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/14/2022 3:34:00 AM

I have read your winning entry and was delighted to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your place of honor. Way to go. Sara

Terry Miller
Date: 3/28/2022 2:18:00 AM

Thank you, Sara.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/10/2022 4:41:00 PM

Free love, eh?... If it sounds to good to be true, guess what?! lol. ~ Gershon

Terry Miller
Date: 3/28/2022 2:18:00 AM

True!

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 3/4/2022 9:18:00 AM

Dear Terry, enjoyed your poem on the theme of love, particularly the last stanza. Your approach is subtle. Best wishes ~ Mala

Terry Miller
Date: 3/5/2022 1:30:00 AM

Thank you, Mala; best wishes to you also, Terry.

Constance La France

Date: 3/4/2022 1:30:00 AM

Terry, congratulations on your win in my Give Me A New Poem Contest ~Constance

Terry Miller
Date: 3/4/2022 5:24:00 AM

Thank you Constance for placing my poem, and for running the contest, Terry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/3/2022 12:34:00 PM

I really like this one. Such a cool ending too. Congrats in the contest.

Terry Miller
Date: 3/4/2022 5:25:00 AM

Thank you, Andrea, for your comments, have a great day.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/2/2022 11:46:00 AM

Enjoyed your imagery!

Terry Miller
Date: 3/3/2022 12:49:00 AM

Thank you Kim, have a great day.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 3/1/2022 4:12:00 PM

Great concept for the contest Terry! True love is free and feeds us. So why are we starving to death! All the best for the contest. Blessings to you.

Terry Miller
Date: 3/2/2022 12:08:00 AM

Thank you, Sam