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Free Flying

"Energy singing through the Hummingbird" As the Wippoorwill calls out at night Camouflaged and hidden During the day out of site A rare bird forbidden In nests of Bluebirds Territorial they are Beautiful blue hue Like a artist mixing paint Producing plumage so strong As the Eagle dances above Circling and protecting us. by Kristen Bruni for For(Four)Beautiful Birds Contest. 4-27-11

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/3/2011 4:02:00 PM

Enjoyed reading your work..Congrats..Sara

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/2/2011 2:26:00 PM

Great Write Kristen, great result elegant write!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/1/2011 9:23:00 PM

you chose a good mix of birds for your poems. I am really enjoying seeing the many ways the poets in the contest approached this unique contest. congratulations. I enjoyed reading yours.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/1/2011 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, kristen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2011 6:16:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win in Constance's "For (Four) Beautful Birds"contest Kristen. Love, Carol

Constance La France

Date: 5/31/2011 9:22:00 PM

congratulations Kristen on 5th place in my contest with this lovely poem~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2011 8:36:00 PM

Congrats Kristen on your amazing win in four birds contest with this beautiful entry my friend.. enjoy another top spot with luv..

John Freeman

Date: 4/30/2011 7:00:00 AM

Unique and beautiful Kristen, a poem that stands out in the uniqueness of you inner personal beauty. I'm greatly thrilled to have the honor of second place in your (for Me) pleasingly inspiring contest. Kristen, please host some more contest of this nature. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/30/2011 5:31:00 AM

Kristen did u hear of a new TV show called Platinum Song at the end of May for songwriters only.. I remember u stating in your blog u wrote songs.. here is a golden opportunity to check it out.. the judge from American Idol ..Kara Guardi .. will be hosting this show trying to find the next new song writer... check it out online.. many of us are very exited... good luck...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/30/2011 5:29:00 AM

Simply elegant Kristen.. the birds come alive with great imagery from your creative pen..luv.. good luck in the contest... Constance will surely luv this entry.. thankxx so very much for my 1st place win in your Love Me Why? contest.. a challenge to create new poetry ..so appreciate u loving Positive Momentum..for this is my life.. positiveness only allowed... very appreciative of this great honor .. happy weekend..

Constance La France

Date: 4/28/2011 5:05:00 PM

Thank you for supporting my contest. Well done!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/27/2011 9:39:00 PM

Good luck..had fun reading your poem:-) take care..p.d.