Free

You look askance because I'm drunk
your nose a-twitch; I stink like skunk
for days I've liquid-dined
no solids only wine
happily gorged on grog and gunk

Once scrounging on the streets, homeless
I now live life in blissful bliss
of bondage I am free
on one big drinking spree
which in itself spells happiness

With jeans and watch by Armani                
you, perfumed doll, though sober be 
to survival shackled
securely manacled
but guess who won the lottery?

To you, Free.  Sadly, our world is a judgemental one.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Van Breda Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 11:42 PM
Good Tuesday Morning :) Being S/A's all our comments come in overnight from USA hey. Just stopping by to see if you have posted recently and came across this one-- I thought it very clever and so typical of our times. That being said, being a Capetonian.. I LOVE my wine. Great poem.. enjoyed it xx
Butterfly Avatar
July 11, 2011 at 6:44 AM
this insightful piece deffinatly deserved more attention, every-one judges differently i guess, but It read like a winner to me...Randa
Ball Avatar
July 8, 2011 at 4:18 AM
Yes indeed my friend. Even though we shouldn't judge our neighbor we do. God Bless, JB
Wesley Avatar
June 26, 2011 at 3:48 PM
Blissfully happy with crosseyed stares. A wonderful write on the shine of wine. :)
Dietrich Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 9:10 PM
gosh, I sure would like to win a lottery!! Very interesting set of limericks, delysia. I wish you luck in the contest.
Davies Avatar
June 23, 2011 at 3:58 PM
Certainly vintage this one....question is what year? :) hic!
Ball Avatar
June 22, 2011 at 6:06 PM
Hmmmm Sadly yes but for a reason. Though we shouldn't consider ourselves better than someone with a dependency we have to be careful or we could get pulled into the same hole with them, and it's hell in there not to mention so expensive it can rob you of everything you own. Including your self respect. That's not freedom my love, that's total enslavement. Good job here . God Bless, JB
K. Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 11:09 AM
Enjoyed reading your limerick series, Delysia :D and thank you for all your inspiring comments in mine :) keep writing! :D
Susan Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 8:46 AM
apt and ironic title. good luck in the contest delysia! p.s. i hope it's not too much of a downer for her and consequently placed lower.
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
June 20, 2011 at 6:25 AM
Excellent Limerick Girlfriend This is a winner in my book.
Onclaud Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 11:39 AM
got a good kick from this delysia.. really sparkles! winning luck to you..:) huggs, nette
Devonshire Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 10:06 AM
Very witty ending to your limerick series, Delysia! I do hate to see people live life in a drunken state though. Guess if you win the lottery, you can afford to live anyway you choose. Unfortunately, DNA evidence HAS revealed that a great number of people executed for crimes were actually innocent. That's why I have problems with the death penalty. Had they been sentenced to life, they could have been released. Wishing you success in Francine's contest! Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 7:43 AM
Lovely take and fine approach to the theme of the contest, good luck, delysia
Dufresne Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 6:43 AM
unique take on the contest, Delysia. good luck in it. I like Limericks
Zzzzz Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:40 AM
A nicely linked threesome, with a good ending! Good luck in the contest. Regards, Robert.
Falotico Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:39 AM
LOL I love the rhyme and the wit and humor....Michael
Edwards Avatar
June 19, 2011 at 4:24 AM
Awesome...luv it xx
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