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Freddy, the Astronomer

Most astronomers gaze up at the stars But Freddy took pretty women to bars -- He'd get in big brawls Crash into brick walls -- When he came to, he'd have sworn he saw Mars

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Alexis Y.

Date: 1/4/2019 3:33:00 PM

Lol! Gershon, This a good write for the contest theme.Wait, it is the contest right? If not this piece needs to be submitted quick before Freddy comes down from Mars lol:-) Alexis

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/5/2019 8:02:00 PM

Thank you so much for the feedback, Alexis...Now I've gotta decide whether to substitute it for "Quite Dirty" in the Limerick contest. Decisions, decisions....LOL. :) gw

Jan Allison

Date: 1/4/2019 2:33:00 AM

lol funny in so many ways Gershon:-) hugs Jan xx

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/4/2019 11:17:00 AM

Thanks, my limerickal friend! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/4/2019 12:05:00 AM

Freddy sounds like he needs to take up a new hobby; he should be taking them to planetariums, not bars. Shame on him!

Gershon Wolf
Date: 1/4/2019 11:17:00 AM

Hey, his dates got 'a night at the fights' along with free drinks. Better than the planetarium, perhaps. LOL. Best wishes, Gershon