Gershon Wolf Poet Limerick

Freddy, the Astronomer

Most astronomers gaze up at the stars
But Freddy took pretty women to bars --
   He'd get in big brawls
   Crash into brick walls -- 
When he came to, he'd have sworn he saw Mars

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Alexis Y. January 4, 2019 at 3:33 PM Lol! Gershon, This a good write for the contest theme.Wait, it is the contest right? If not this piece needs to be submitted quick before Freddy comes down from Mars lol:-) Alexis Gershon Wolf January 5, 2019 at 8:02 PM Thank you so much for the feedback, Alexis...Now I've gotta decide whether to substitute it for "Quite Dirty" in the Limerick contest. Decisions, decisions....LOL. :) gw

Jan Allison January 4, 2019 at 2:33 AM lol funny in so many ways Gershon:-) hugs Jan xx Gershon Wolf January 4, 2019 at 11:17 AM Thanks, my limerickal friend! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger January 4, 2019 at 12:05 AM Freddy sounds like he needs to take up a new hobby; he should be taking them to planetariums, not bars. Shame on him! Gershon Wolf January 4, 2019 at 11:17 AM Hey, his dates got 'a night at the fights' along with free drinks. Better than the planetarium, perhaps. LOL. Best wishes, Gershon