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Fred Fled

She had
 got mad

 and threw
 a shoe

 he tucked
 and ducked

 and ran
 from Jan

 Oh Fred
 she said

 you make
 me ache

 Allow
me now

To take 
a break

Goodbye
 A sigh

12-17-2020

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Jan Allison Date: 1/1/2021 2:20:00 PM dropping back with my congrats Joseph, Happy New year :-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/30/2020 12:52:00 PM back with belated congrats. I can't believe I took this long to get to a footles contest winner list! Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 12/28/2020 6:26:00 PM Allow me now ... a soft me-ow! :) gw Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 12/28/2020 8:31:00 AM Very creative work using this form. Enjoyed reading about Fred and Jan's love affair. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 12/25/2020 6:39:00 AM A wonderful story you spin here in this restricting form, Joseph:) congratulations on your win and a Merry Christmas to you and yours:) Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 12/23/2020 10:56:00 AM Witty and clever write Joseph and HUGE congratulations on your great win. A wonderful, happy and peaceful Christmas to you and your family, and may 2021 bring all your wishes to fruition. Hug and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 12/23/2020 10:19:00 AM Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-)Alexis Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 12/22/2020 12:38:00 PM Well done telling the story in this challenging format. Congrats on your win, Joseph Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 12/20/2020 3:47:00 PM so cute and using Jan's name. GREAT job, Joseph. Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 12/17/2020 4:31:00 PM ha ha love the clever story you wove:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/17/2020 11:01:00 AM You made a cohesive story using the footles. Cleverly done, Joseph. Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/17/2020 10:35:00 AM Love how you combined the footles to make a story. Good luck in the contest Joseph Tom Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 12/17/2020 10:18:00 AM Lovely footle, Joseph. I must be careful of the flying shoes. :) ~~ Login to Reply

Brandy Nicole Date: 12/17/2020 9:41:00 AM Oh my !!! Fred certainly needs to Watch Out for flying Shoes. Perhaps he needs to just stay away from Jan. That's sound like the best plan. :) This is cute, clever and creative. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 12/17/2020 7:42:00 AM In Italy they used to use shoes all the time to throw at people, lol, nice one Joseph, Merry Christmas, best wishes for a healthy life full of inspiration and poetry. Login to Reply

Heidi Sands Date: 12/17/2020 5:23:00 AM Great one Joseph :) Login to Reply

Bobby May Date: 12/17/2020 4:59:00 AM This is GREAT!! Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 12/17/2020 4:45:00 AM WoW! Joseph, This is an excellent entry for the contest! It was so on point for one footle to another! It had such good flow and rhythm. It was funny, as well. Your chosen words described a hilarious scene. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis Login to Reply