Fred Fled

She had got mad and threw a shoe he tucked and ducked and ran from Jan Oh Fred she said you make me ache Allow me now To take a break Goodbye A sigh 12-17-2020

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Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2021 2:20:00 PM

dropping back with my congrats Joseph, Happy New year :-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/30/2020 12:52:00 PM

back with belated congrats. I can't believe I took this long to get to a footles contest winner list!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/28/2020 6:26:00 PM

Allow me now ... a soft me-ow! :) gw

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/28/2020 8:31:00 AM

Very creative work using this form. Enjoyed reading about Fred and Jan's love affair. Thanks for stopping by my page. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/25/2020 6:39:00 AM

A wonderful story you spin here in this restricting form, Joseph:) congratulations on your win and a Merry Christmas to you and yours:)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 12/23/2020 10:56:00 AM

Witty and clever write Joseph and HUGE congratulations on your great win. A wonderful, happy and peaceful Christmas to you and your family, and may 2021 bring all your wishes to fruition. Hug and blessings, Jennifer.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/23/2020 10:19:00 AM

Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. Have a nice day:-)Alexis

John Watt

Date: 12/22/2020 12:38:00 PM

Well done telling the story in this challenging format. Congrats on your win, Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/20/2020 3:47:00 PM

so cute and using Jan's name. GREAT job, Joseph.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/17/2020 4:31:00 PM

ha ha love the clever story you wove:-) hugs jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/17/2020 11:01:00 AM

You made a cohesive story using the footles. Cleverly done, Joseph.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/17/2020 10:35:00 AM

Love how you combined the footles to make a story. Good luck in the contest Joseph Tom

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/17/2020 10:18:00 AM

Lovely footle, Joseph. I must be careful of the flying shoes. :) ~~

Brandy Nicole

Date: 12/17/2020 9:41:00 AM

Oh my !!! Fred certainly needs to Watch Out for flying Shoes. Perhaps he needs to just stay away from Jan. That's sound like the best plan. :) This is cute, clever and creative. Your thoughts bring a smile. :) Brandy

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 12/17/2020 7:42:00 AM

In Italy they used to use shoes all the time to throw at people, lol, nice one Joseph, Merry Christmas, best wishes for a healthy life full of inspiration and poetry.

Heidi Sands

Date: 12/17/2020 5:23:00 AM

Great one Joseph :)

Bobby May

Date: 12/17/2020 4:59:00 AM

This is GREAT!!

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/17/2020 4:45:00 AM

WoW! Joseph, This is an excellent entry for the contest! It was so on point for one footle to another! It had such good flow and rhythm. It was funny, as well. Your chosen words described a hilarious scene. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis