Fred

I can do it Fred always said
he couldn’t and now he’s dead

penned 13/09/2018

destinyepitaph

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Connie Marcum Wong

September 19, 2018 at 1:29 PM

Made me laugh this morning Seren. Congratulations on your wonderful second place win! : )

Sandra Haight

September 18, 2018 at 7:39 PM

Poor Fred, Seren! A very funny Epitaph! Congrats on your podium win. Hugs, Sandra

Seren Roberts

September 18, 2018 at 9:55 PM

thanks Sandra ...Seren

Virginia Waters

September 18, 2018 at 7:31 PM

very succinctly funny and a bit wise too - congrats

Seren Roberts

September 18, 2018 at 9:55 PM

thank you for commenting...Seren

Jan Allison

September 18, 2018 at 2:41 PM

ha ha ha love it Seren:-) many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Seren Roberts

September 18, 2018 at 10:01 PM

Hi Jan glad you liked it .. .Seren

Line Gauthier

September 18, 2018 at 12:57 PM

Back with a well deserved silver medal, Seren. Superbly done.

Seren Roberts

September 18, 2018 at 9:59 PM

thanks Line ....Seren

Jesse Rowe

September 18, 2018 at 12:01 PM

Congratulations on your 2nd place trophy win in my contest. This one is funny because of the brevity of the explanation. Reminded me of a joke I had heard a while back about the most common last words being, "Hey, guys. Watch this!"

Seren Roberts

September 18, 2018 at 9:59 PM

thank you so much Jesse.....Seren