Diane Christian Poet Rhyme

Freckles

As the temperature starts to rise
A surprise I see before my eyes
Lots more  tiny golden speckles
the mystery and beauty of freckles.

 once at school my friend said  I look like
I had been sun bathing under a tea strainer
now I see what she meant, hundreds of them on my arms
the hotter it's getting more are appearing LOL  but it's just another  blessing from God

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John Rhinem April 22, 2012 at 3:21 PM Smile ˜ Hi Baby, did I ever tell your precious beauty, how much I love You, sweet baby ˜ Well, I do baby ˜ Forever & for always, John!:) ˜

Sarah Seraphin November 25, 2011 at 12:10 PM * "Yessss, Lovely Freckles Upon A Beautiful Woman Are Sooo Pretty & Appealing * My Dear Sweet Beautiful Diane * Lovely Poem * And Thank Your Splendours Once More For The Sweet Visit * Romantic, Yesss Indeed * My Luv, Always & Always * Sarah." *

Debbie Guzzi July 31, 2009 at 9:53 AM nod nod....be careful too much of a good things not so good! LOL Light & Love

Vince Suzadail Jr. July 21, 2009 at 1:05 PM One of my first bigtime crushes was a freckle faced Hayley Mills. God Bless. Vince

Sara Kendrick July 19, 2009 at 6:09 AM Love the write. Sara

Shannon O'Leary July 6, 2009 at 7:36 PM I can relate to this poem since I have freckles! I think this is a creative way to write about them! Nicely done! Thanks for your comment on my poem! I really appreciate the feedback!

Lord R. E. Taylor July 5, 2009 at 11:52 AM Diane...I hope that you do treasure those freckles...I think that a woman with freckles is the prettiest of all women around!!!! THE MORE THE BETTER!!!! BTW, I am not an argumentative person either...I just get REALLY quiet.

James Fraser July 5, 2009 at 8:47 AM Freckless are kool, freckles are you - Diane Christian, Bless You>>James

Carrie Richards July 5, 2009 at 7:12 AM This one made me smile !! Well said !

John Freeman July 4, 2009 at 12:38 PM Beauty marks of love, from above! the painting strokes, as love's spokes, of love! Lovingly Moses

James Peranteau July 4, 2009 at 11:24 AM Sweet poem Diane,...all the really cute girls in school had them ! *smiles* james

Sajdah Al-Riyami July 4, 2009 at 10:43 AM ROFL!-->I Think boys with Freckles are usualy hott and girls with em are All cute li'l beauties.

Charmaine Chircop July 4, 2009 at 10:18 AM i dont have freckles but i aways find them somehow sweet--charma;-)

Ronald Bingham July 4, 2009 at 9:22 AM My wife used to be red haired and had lots of freckles and when our youngest was small she would tell him his freckles were angel kisses. God Bless. Ron