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Freakshow Club

She excitedly entered the house; dry leaves and grass were fiddling against each other in the night wind, from behind her. As she walked in the house, the wooden floor warped gently, with the sounds of a soft door knock. The people, animals and objects in portraits looked as though they were moving, as she climbed the stairs. Shadows danced all around her. All these experiences were so exciting, that she almost screamed with excitement. "This is my best Halloween ever!" she whispered. To become a member of Freakshow Club, a newbie was expected to be brave when entering a house or woods the elite members chose. They told her to enter House 254 in Elmostreet, but she chose House 254 in Elmstreet! Date of Entry: 10/21/2016

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Date: 11/2/2016 8:35:00 PM
Congratulations on your win,Teddy :-) enjoyed reading and love the ending. Thank you so very much for entering my contest Hugs Eve
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/4/2016 2:19:00 AM
Welcome, Eve...it was really fun!!! *_^ Thank you for enjoying and applauding my work in your contest!! *^_^*
Date: 11/2/2016 12:15:00 PM
Wonderful! Congratulations on the win!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/4/2016 2:17:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my piece, Carol!!! *^_^*
Date: 11/2/2016 12:09:00 PM
- Congratulations on your winning poems in the Halloween contest, Teddy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/4/2016 2:15:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne Lise, for your kind applause!! *^_^*
Date: 11/2/2016 9:34:00 AM
Teddy CONGRATULATIONS on your win with this eerie and creepy write, I love it ~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/4/2016 2:13:00 AM
Thank you so much for your applause, and enjoying my piece, BW!!! *^_^* I kinda joined together Stephen King's Creepshow horror style, with Nightmare on Elm Street suspense....
Date: 11/2/2016 7:46:00 AM
Hi Teddy, Congratulations on your 2nd place win:-) Alexis
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/4/2016 2:10:00 AM
Hi too, Alexis!! Thank you so much for your kind applause!! *^_^*
Date: 11/1/2016 11:17:00 PM
The references from the freak show and elmstreet are amazing. Congratulations on your win with this fabulous poem.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 11/2/2016 6:10:00 AM
I'm really glad you enjoyed my piece, Afzal!!! Thank you so much for your applause!! ;-)
Date: 10/21/2016 5:07:00 AM
Brilliant way of bringing it out ...
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 10/21/2016 6:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Probir, for enjoying this piece, and giving me continuous support!! ;-)

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