Frankenstein Addresses His Monster

Frankenstein was not afraid
of the creature that he made.
He grinned, and kindly said,
"Put a smile on your ugly mug.
Lighten up, you big ol' lug".
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Godwin Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 11:23 AM
Kyle said, 'and so Frankenstein hit him in the head.' Again, Kyle & I are clicking randomly on your poems, well, he is picking by titles.
Crandall Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 7:34 PM
Yep, that's a pretty good final line. I like it! It's great to know that y'all are reading my poems!
Rodrigues Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 5:59 PM
Cute
Crandall Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 8:06 PM
Thanks, Kim!
Edmonds  Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 10:47 AM
The creature Frankenstein had made, said it’s because of you that I’m afraid. I don’t know what’s expected of me. Frankenstein said hang around long enough and you’ll see… Beryl
Crandall Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 8:05 PM
Haha, poor monster!
Goldsmith Avatar
May 18, 2026 at 9:48 AM
I enjoyed reading your fun/creative write. Oh yes, "Lighten up, you big ol' lug."" ~Smile~ Have a great day writing away...........
Crandall Avatar
May 19, 2026 at 8:04 PM
Haha - thanks, Paula!
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