Frank and Tim and Beijing

FRANK AND TIM AND BEIJING

Frank and I planned a visit to Beijing,
The attraction was their night life
And bright lights,
Maybe we would visit one or two
Historical sights?
We drank a lot on our trip
To the East,
And we didn’t feel disturbed in 
The least,
That the passengers just gave us
A glare and a stare,
And most probably wished we were
Really not there!
We arrived, and the pilot wished us
All a pleasant stay,
Wow, we were now ready to begin
Our two week holiday,
But what now, we could not speak
A word of Chinese,
Not even to say hello, thank-you
Or please!
On the way to the youth hostel 10 men
Surrounded us with guns,
They bundled us into a chauffeur driven
Bentley,
Not one of them spoke English, and not at
All friendly.
For a fleeting moment I thought we
Are now going to die,
And that our end was horribly nigh!
They ushered us into an opulent mansion
And said,
Now you see boss, this time I had a very
Real vision of us on the floor, dead!
The boss, an eccentric man briskly
Walked in, 
Exceptionally tall, and very thin,
I recognized him immediately, he
Was my Mom’s brother, Uncle Ben,
He looked at me and laughed, something
Was wrong,
But at least we could speak to him,
In our mother tongue!
He explained that he was the boss of
A drug ring,
Now there’s a thing!
My Uncle Ben,
A drug lord
I was in no mood for him
To invite us on board!
A mistake he sheepishly explained,
They were looking for the brother,
Of his head man’s mother!
He apologized on behalf of what,
His men had done,
I couldn’t wait to tell my mom!
Uncle Ben offered us his Bentley for
The remainder of our holiday in China,
And that he was about to retire,
Because, he suffered from Angina.
Our last day arrived, we got on 
The plane,
Tim and I wrote Uncle Ben a card and
Thanked him a ton,
We had made memories in Beijing
Only experienced by some,
Like ours, probably none!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 4/4/2019 7:02:00 PM
Hi, Jenn! I agree with Cay Cay. You really are gifted. Really a smashing piece. I do admire you. And thank you for being what I see Poetry Soup is...a place for loving others, sesides..ourselves. Wishing you the best Huggs from the USA, Panagiota
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Date: 4/5/2019 1:32:00 AM
Hi Panagiota, Thank you dear friend, and thanks for joining Poetry Soup as our circle of friends grow is growing and so much more love is pooled! A lovely compliment which your poems deserve as well! Poetry hugs, Jenny.
Date: 3/4/2019 7:08:00 PM
Three story-poems in a row - I'm thinking that might be your thing; stories ~~ how great that is! You definitely have a knack for it and, it seems, a love for writing them. I bet your ideas are endless - something I both admire and envy. This story was full of the unexpected - love it when that happens! Be blessed ... CayCay
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Date: 3/5/2019 12:47:00 PM
CayCay I love your comments, you take the time and effort to give such intense answers - you are incredible! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/3/2019 4:37:00 PM
A brilliantly crafted and very imaginative tale as penned by a wonderful friend truly talented poet!! A fav..
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Date: 3/5/2019 12:45:00 PM
Hi Dear Robert, Thank-you for an awesome comment and thank you for being such an immense support and an incredible mentor - poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 3/1/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thank you for taking me along with you to China, Jenny. Yours is a fertile imagination! Maybe this could be the basis for an adventure book! ~ warm regards // paul
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Date: 3/2/2019 1:55:00 AM
Thank-you so much Paul for a really lovely comment. I have considered it but a little apprehensive to take that first leap! Take care, neither of us are thinking of that final trip we have to make, that is why even as a young girl I never went to fortune tellers! Poetry hugs, Jenny.
Date: 2/27/2019 12:03:00 PM
wonderful overload of poetic adventure, jen... i have been to beijing and visited a museum which featured an opium machine... huggs
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Date: 2/28/2019 12:09:00 PM
Wow that is really something Nette, I thought maybe Beijing would be a port of call for drug dealers and for seekers of opium or any other drug! Thanks for a very informative comment Nette, Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/27/2019 6:52:00 AM
Jennifer, this is your imagination on speed-dial, and it is wonderful! Loved every single word of this one! I am diving in for another "go".
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Date: 2/27/2019 9:31:00 AM
My nursery school teacher many moons ago, told my mother (so my mother told me), that I had a vivid imagination at play, then i played, now I write! Thanks for a grand comment Caren! Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/26/2019 2:54:00 PM
No, I'm sure this visit to Bejing was unique in many respects. Could this be a true story, Jennifer? Would hate to encounter a family member leading a drug cartel, but at least you and Tim were spared from harsh punishment. Very interesting story behind your poem! Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:46:00 PM
No, my pretty friend, just my imagination going into overdrive! Glad you thought so though and that my story sounded true! Thank you for a wonderful comment Carolyn. Poetry hugs, Jennifer
Date: 2/26/2019 2:48:00 PM
You have a splendid imagination..a dream trip in a foreign country..quite an adventure it was..kudos for this exciting story you wrote, Jennifer.
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Date: 2/26/2019 10:55:00 PM
Thank-you Vijay , yes Frank and Tim were young and wanting fun, which they did have,after an incredible fright, and in luxury - how lucky was that for them finally! Feel proud that you enjoyed my story Vijay , as you always wow us with your poems - once again congrats for your POTD. Poetry hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/26/2019 6:29:00 AM
Sounds like a good time was had by all, well penned Jennifer..
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Date: 2/26/2019 8:39:00 AM
Hi Joseph, Me and my fantasies - I think they got more than what they bargained for! Thank-you for a lovely comment. Poetry Hugs, Jennifer.
Date: 2/25/2019 9:27:00 AM
Wow, enjoyed this wonderful poetry gem..
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Date: 2/25/2019 10:32:00 AM
Harry how nice to have you visit - a little different , but when my rainbow imagination takes a grip on me, my addiction to poetry makes my pen go into into poetry soup mode! poetry hugs, Jennifer.
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