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Fraidy Cat

Halloween night, a slender flapping scarecrow, With the remorseless wind, he's doing a tango, An owl is hooting, and large yellow eyes glow, A witch in black is cackling, in deeper shadow. Jack-o'-lantern grinning wildly in the window, Dark night carries sounds of a ghostly bellow, Blind bats are flying, a yellow moon is mellow, There seem to be monsters wherever you go! The wind is moaning, like one in great sorrow, Somewhere a cat screeches, in feline soprano, A man runs rapidly, beyond fragrant meadow, As if being chased, but by what, I don't know. Written on October 18, 2021 For: Halloween Monorhyme Contest Poetry Contest Sponsor: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 11/10/2021 9:46:00 AM
Haunting images of Halloween in pumpkin, black and yellow Evelyn! I especially love the last two lines - "chased, but by what, I don't know." "Terror-i-fic" with creatively chosen rhymes. Wonderfully creative conclusion. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/9/2021 10:30:00 PM
Awesome write, Evelyn. Halloween is such a fun time for the children. Congratulations on your win. Hugs
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Date: 11/9/2021 10:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A fun/cute~~story/write. Have a blessed day....................
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 11/9/2021 6:07:00 PM
Thank you for your kind congratulations and appreciation, Paula. Do enjoy your week. :)
Date: 10/22/2021 12:59:00 PM
Super scene painting, carried me right into its midst and my hair blew right into my eyes! Scary! A very well crafted poem enjoyed this master penning. Blessings to your day! sally
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/22/2021 9:29:00 PM
Glad you were brave enough to join me. Thank you, Sally. :D
Date: 10/22/2021 6:19:00 AM
Love the spooky energy and the rhyme in this one, What a disciplined writer you are! This one is sure to do well. Good luck.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/22/2021 12:02:00 PM
Thank you for the lovely thoughts and vote of confidence, Karen. :)
Date: 10/21/2021 10:08:00 PM
Hello Evelyn ... just the mention of the word 'halloween' puts many on edge Evelyn - Lindsay
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/22/2021 12:06:00 PM
Hi Lindsay, the roaming monsters didn't help either, I'll bet. Have a great day. :)
Date: 10/19/2021 1:06:00 AM
I am noot easily scared but this brought me some shivers. Great poem.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/19/2021 11:12:00 AM
Thank you very much, Victor. Hugs.
Date: 10/18/2021 7:05:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem about your cat fraidy, your metaphors and wording were incredible, and your rhyme shed even more enchantment on it—my best wishes with the contest.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 10/18/2021 8:23:00 PM
Thank you for your encouraging words, Lasaad. Blessings and hugs, Evelyn

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