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Fragrant Promise

Nascent pristine hopes sprout stealthily from the submerged swamps of anxieties, parched earth frets over consequences to fuel naive hopes into realities of void burdened with the clutter of aged promises, fervent wind denies hope to flourish effervescence of faith sustains the sapling. I shiver at my failed encounters, lost desires from broken promises; you radiate truth with a divine Aurora calming my perturbed oceans of scars, soothing whispers dissolving delusions. Your promise of a love that lasts forever blooms with my infant hope born yet again in my ancient orchard of disappointments, perhaps hope is an everlasting promise too. When my hallucinations overtake my existence you bridge my fantasies with visible world and fuse my bliss with your intuition. Unfulfilled promises, superfluous allegations in a world where none volunteers to be a promise. You erase my hazy visions of torn pages and color them with your dripping love. Two parallel waves in unison moving forth rising with crests and falling with troughs merging in the tranquility of a shore afar next to the ocean enchanted by seagulls guiding my lost spirit in storms with your light. My hopes have grown into a lush fir tree swaying with your glistening smiles. You become my universe peeking into imaginations of my stories, melodies, musings at nights; and when I return to reality you wait with my sublime corner by your side, my book of musings flourishes by your essence. Perhaps humans should keep their promises, I believe theirs too get fulfilled someday. I smile every time the fir tree drenches me dissolving the fragrance of musk-soaked love in raindrops and snowflakes of your promise-- To be the love that retains the existence of everlasting hope in this world-- your promise.. May 28, 2020 The Promise Poetry Contest Sponsor: Silent One Winner: First Place BRIAN'S CHOICE Z,any form,any theme Poetry Contest Winner: Honorable Mention

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Date: 6/6/2020 7:16:00 PM
Back to congratulate you for your top placement in the Promises contest. Happy to see your poetic talents acknowledged, Aditi. Many blessings to you ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 8:22:00 PM
Thank you so much for your constant support and encouraging words my dear friend. Have a blessed weekend :)
Date: 6/6/2020 3:56:00 PM
This is brilliant, Aditi. Each and every line is stunning! Congratulations!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 6:11:00 PM
Thank you for your generous words of appreciation Mala! Glad you loved my words. Blessings and love :)
Date: 6/6/2020 2:14:00 PM
Glad to see this stunning poem win at the TOP of #1. Your verses flow in unlimited reservoir of creativity. You shine, Aditi. BIG congrats!
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Date: 6/6/2020 2:15:00 PM
Blessed by your visit and kind words of appreciation Vijay. Thank you for encouraging me :)
Date: 6/6/2020 9:19:00 AM
Wow!! Aditi..you are a brilliant Poet...This is a great work...Congrats on you win. :)
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 10:17:00 AM
Thank you for such generous words of appreciation Omika. God bless you :)
Date: 6/6/2020 7:25:00 AM
So many great lines in here, I do not know where to start.. You really know how to create vivid imagery through your words... Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/6/2020 10:17:00 AM
So glad you loved my words. Thank you so much for your constant encouragement and kind words of appreciation and for my placement in your contest. God bless you :)
Date: 5/30/2020 6:52:00 AM
"When my hallucinations overtake my existence you bridge my fantasies with visible world and fuse my bliss with your intuition." - this by itself is more than a complete poem, my friend. This whole poem is a wow. One of my FAVEs.
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Date: 5/30/2020 10:49:00 AM
Thank you so much Caren for your lovely words of appreciation for the fave. God bless you :)
Date: 5/29/2020 3:04:00 AM
Aditi, your crests and troughs form a picture frame of this tumultuous seascape you paint. "Guiding my lost spirit in storms with your light" provides the hope in the midst of the tempest. So many sumptuous words and such dazzling imagery, both maritime and emotional, describe your wave-tossed ride so brilliantly, ending with your always wonderful clinging to hope. Gorgeous poetry, my dear friend. Powerful and gorgeous.
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Date: 5/29/2020 6:10:00 AM
Every time I am grateful for the time you take to blend into my words and travel with them. This is really a great source of motivation for me dear friend. Thank you for your beautiful words of encouragement and appreciation. God bless you John :)
Date: 5/28/2020 9:31:00 PM
"fuse my bliss with your intuition" -it's genius! Good writing Aditi! I enjoyed it all the way through. Justin
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Date: 5/29/2020 6:08:00 AM
I am glad you enjoyed my words! Thank you so much for your kind words of appreciation :)
Date: 5/28/2020 10:01:00 AM
Wow Aditi, this is a marvelous write, so many exquisite phrases and an easy reading flow. Bridge my fantasies, fuse my bliss with your intuition. A wonderful read, I can sense the time and effort put into this one. Thanks for posting.
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Date: 5/28/2020 11:33:00 AM
Thanks for taking your time to read and absorb my words. Blessed by your encouraging words John. Blessings :)

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