Fragrant

petals fall down

drifting on a spring breeze

to blanket the ground

reminiscent of the snow

but fragrant to the senses
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 3:02 PM
this is lovely, FRancine. You are going tanka crazy these days!
Manassian Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 8:40 PM
Francine, this is very lovely. It engages the senses! Great tanka! Thanks for your comment on my tanka. I appreciate the tip. It is my first attempt! :) Thanks for the encouragement.
Williams Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 3:09 PM
Francine these tanka's of yours are quite stunning...David
Martin Avatar
April 7, 2013 at 2:49 PM
Hey, Francine. This is gentle and beautiful :)
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