Fragrance of Rain- a Lento

Form Lento is not included in PS's list, So I have named it rhyme. Please see the 
form Lento explained below the poem)

Fragrance of Rain - A Lento Running with hand in hand in the hazy rain Feeling the warmth, drenched in each other Living on the moments, besieged by haze Nothing, not a fraction of the day matters. Care not to go home with the umbrella closed Share the drops dribbling down window pane Fire inside, glowing in smiles and hugs shared Slumbered to sleep by, in the foggy rain.
+++++ Date :13-11-13 Dr. Ram Mehta Sixth place win Contest: Fragrance of Rain by nette onclaud **** Lento Poetry ~ abcb defe/ First Word In Each Line Should Rhyme A Lento consists of two quatrains with a fixed rhyme scheme of abcb, defe - the second and forth lines of each stanza must rhyme. The fun part of this poem is that all the first words of the first verse should rhyme and then all the first words of the second verse should rhyme. There is no fixed syllable structure to the Lento.

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Date: 11/24/2013 9:17:00 PM
I love the poem and form! Congrats on your win...love and blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 11/23/2013 4:17:00 PM
Congrats on your great win with this new form..Sara
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:34:00 PM
Very well done! Congratulations on your win!...Thank you for the kind congrats on my poem!
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Date: 11/20/2013 5:07:00 PM
very nice Ram I love the flow congrats on your win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 11/20/2013 6:59:00 AM
A very good poem Dr Ram, Nice win
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Date: 11/19/2013 9:41:00 PM
Dr Ram, , Congratulations on your beautiful FRAGRANCE OF RAIN poem... Hugs ~LINDA~
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:52:00 PM
I like the way you made yours so romantic, Dr. Ram. I think it is the most romantic of them all. Congrats for your win.
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Date: 11/19/2013 1:02:00 PM
and warm congrats to you for your win in my contest, dr.ram... yes, no umbrella. feel the rain!..:) huggs
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Date: 11/16/2013 7:21:00 PM
thank you, dr.ram.. kindly put your name, contest title and date of poem... :) huggs
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Date: 11/15/2013 2:52:00 PM
A new form to inspire me, and your lovely poem reflects the beauty of both the form and the rain. Well done!!
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Date: 11/14/2013 10:01:00 AM
A really nice one
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Date: 11/14/2013 7:12:00 AM
Interesting form that you have introduced..I will look it up..It would be a lot to remember when writing a work..Thanks for the honor of being in your winners' list and thanks for letting me know..Sara
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