Fragrance

Oh my gawd, I reek of you! Your aroma permeates my skin. Sweat and sex and heated lust. The mingled scents of last night's sin. Your fragrance, like exotic perfume, Oozes from my pores by the hour. It's all I can sense, the bouquet of you. I don't think I'll ever take a shower.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/11/2010 12:34:00 PM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Ron. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2010 10:44:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Ron. I wish you the best always in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you have a wonderful week filled with inspiration. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2010 9:00:00 PM

oohh this was very readable . you reak alright lol i'm just messin..cool exotic write.. like the line " the mingled scents of last night's sin".. that pretty much sum's up what the smell was... P.D.