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Fragmented Thoughts

I am lost in my thoughts musing and pondering feelings and in my contemplation thoughts crumple reveries crumbling with age- frail and weak falling into fragments just threads of my decaying memories from the many corridors of my mind and I write words . . . that crash together- fold and curl I crumple the paper casting it to the floor to wither and die papers gather wrinkled, crinkled I, daydream in deep thoughts . . . of time, places, faces silent thoughts -jumbled knots brooding thoughts . . . crumbled pieces broken I pick up my pen to write of shadows twisting, twirling, and whirling inside me but words disintegrate and I tear the page into tiny fragments I am struggling to find a dream, I dreamt or memory . . . . thoughts are gathering again (quick, quick pick up the pen) write- write before the thought is lost again this fragile seed growing wild now oh, thoughts are kisses . . . . that come drifting ______________________ January 9, 2021 Poetry/Free Verse/fragmented thoughts Copyright Protected, ID 01-1319-783-09 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, Crumpled Thoughts sponsor, John Lawless, Judged 01/16/2021 First Place

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Date: 1/18/2021 7:48:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this muse, so insightful, worthy of reflection. Thanks likewise for my placement in your recently-judged contest. God bless you.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/18/2021 8:44:00 AM
Beata, thank you for the congrats and the comment and you are welcome on your win _Constance
Date: 1/17/2021 10:07:00 AM
Constance I loved that final couplet. This poem had me revisiting it just to settle into its rhythm and ponder its many "thoughts"....well done and thanks for playing in the contest
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Date: 1/17/2021 11:14:00 AM
John, thank you so much for another inspiring contest, and for my wonderful placement, your themes always take me to a deep place within- Constance
Date: 1/9/2021 10:52:00 AM
Sometimes the mind is a dangerous thing to visit.
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Constance La France
Date: 1/9/2021 2:33:00 PM
Rob, thanks for visiting, yes, sometimes reveries into the mind can tear a person to pieces _Constance

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