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splintered dreams images faded and torn with emotions worsening with time greatness questioned as original intent swathed by gossipy stares create feelings of dismay enter doubts of one’s self-esteem causing victim like symptoms with no foreseeable end to this long and shadowed catastrophe pieces of la-la land forever falling

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 6/30/2022 7:18:00 PM
"Images faded and torn, "who can't relate to that. Feelings are far reaching and intense. So gla you visited me so I could meet you.
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 7/1/2022 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Barbara! It's good to meet you.
Date: 3/25/2022 9:51:00 AM
This could have been put in an "eggshell", because in order to make an "omelet" one must break a couple "eggs". your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 7/1/2022 6:10:00 AM
Thank you, Gary!
Date: 3/18/2022 5:09:00 PM
Life can really get messy sometimes, and through us complete out of whack. Have a good weekend! Franci. Bill
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 7/1/2022 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Bill.
Date: 3/14/2022 7:36:00 AM
Gossipy stares and pieces of la-la land…
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 7/1/2022 6:09:00 AM
Thank you, Kim.
Date: 3/13/2022 5:46:00 PM
Dear Franci, your poem is exquisitely touching - I can relate to your feelings. BW ~ Mala
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Franci Hoffman
Date: 7/1/2022 6:08:00 AM
Thank you, Malabika!
Date: 10/17/2021 1:30:00 AM
A poem, of an unforgiving world or its human race, what ever, that's how i read this amazing gem of poetry.
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