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Fragment Fourteen Point Two

Nothing less than false pretenses Different folks, strokes, different faces Breaking my heart into pieces Hurting big time in all places

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/21/2016 8:53:00 PM

Jesus, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 1/15/2016 8:59:00 PM

Jesus, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/27/2015 9:58:00 AM

simple lines but it pulls much!!~OLive Eloisa

Jesus De Castro
Date: 8/27/2015 1:21:00 PM

Thanks Olive for taking time to read my work! :)