Fragment Fourteen Point Two

Nothing less than false pretenses
Different folks, strokes, different faces
Breaking my heart into pieces
Hurting big time in all places
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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March 21, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Jesus, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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January 15, 2016 at 8:59 PM
Jesus, I like every line of your poem above. Thank you for sharing. ** SKAT **
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July 27, 2015 at 9:58 AM
simple lines but it pulls much!!~OLive Eloisa
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August 27, 2015 at 1:21 PM
Thanks Olive for taking time to read my work! :)
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