Fragment

There was scent of a fire in the call of the wind from a few blocks away, I could smell it today... someone burning a pile, in this first day of fall Leaves and debris, with smoke on the bend It darkened the sky of the September light with fragments of char, as dark as the night It drifted our way, and into the breeze, and it lifted the ash that caught in the fray, bits fluttering down then, onto our lawn, with fringes of gray A scrap from the classifieds, of newspaper ads A fragment, not burned, with a portion so sad just a singe on the edge, on the fringe of my day A scrap now was pending........and I dreaded the end I read someone's query, and my worries were tossed to the smoke-singed sureness, of a pet that had been lost ~ For those moments we had owned her, she was lost and alone Hungry and howling, on that cold autumn day It was a star-crossed encounter, a dachshund we had found We would feed her, and bed her, had asked all around and a with a few passing days.....she had found a new home. Here in our hearts, becoming our own A name we had chosen, she came when we called but today ...now I know, she is not ours, at all... The wind off the river, pushing paper and leaves fragments of yesterday fluttering our way......... Spinning on down, every twist, every turn changing the moment......without being heard Small bitter pieces are coming our way changing small fragments, and the heart of today.
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A  Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 2:44 PM
HI CARRIE, CONGRATS on your win ~ SKAT ~
Allison Avatar
January 29, 2015 at 2:20 PM
An exceptional write Carrie - many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
Ryerson Avatar
January 28, 2015 at 5:55 PM
This just blew me away Carrie...That singed scrap of newspaper REALLY got to me. This narrative has such a beautiful yet melancholy tone to it...almost as if you had lost a child? And then there's that RHYME scheme...
Chakrabarty Avatar
January 27, 2015 at 3:29 AM
Hi Carrie. Congrats>love>rajat
Roper Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 4:55 PM
Carrie, good descriptive write, they sure grow on us . Congratulations on your win and a 7. Blessings dear friend eve
Carmack Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 3:19 PM
Thank you for entering this eloquent poem, and congrats.
Haight Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 3:12 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your 1st Place win for this wonderful poem that touched my heart. My daughter took in a Tuxedo cat years ago, one who was surely owned by someone who took care of him. She scoured the newspaper ads and called everywhere trying to find the owner. No owner came forth, but she would have been heartbroken if he or she did. Anyway, it's been 12 years and "Georgie" has had a wonderful life with my daughter's family. Anyway, I love your poem! Hugs, Sandra
Guzzi Avatar
January 26, 2015 at 2:44 PM
A charming verse which did so much more that what was expected a 1 for me. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
A  Avatar
September 23, 2013 at 10:13 PM
congratulations Carrie.... Love ~SKAT~
George   Avatar
September 22, 2013 at 11:36 PM
So heartfelt dear Carrie. It brought tears to my eyes. You are such a gifted writer. Lainie
A   Avatar
September 20, 2013 at 10:15 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your "Fragment" winning poem. xox~ LINDA
Macfarlane Avatar
September 18, 2013 at 9:00 PM
Wow Carrie an amazing story of how life can change in an instant. Excellent write and win! Hugs
Guzzi Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 5:00 PM
wow so good Carrie! Who's #1 YOU Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Dillard Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 8:44 AM
Nicely crafted work! Looks like you've been busy in my absence. RAY
Puddifoot Avatar
September 17, 2013 at 4:54 AM
congrats on another first rate 1st place win, carrie! when I read this the first time around I said it was an excellent entry :)
Tsiluma Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 11:21 PM
Superbly penned! Congrats on your win!
Delaney Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 8:28 PM
So touching and very heart rending if it is true. Congratulations on a fine win. SuZ
Mandani Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 7:02 PM
Very nice. I like it.
May Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 4:01 PM
congrats on a great win Carrie
Lamoureux Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 3:15 PM
You are on a winning streak Carrie, Congratulations!
Adams Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 3:11 PM
so beautiful, yet touchingly sad at the same time...well done...congrats on your first place win :)
Hamilton Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:42 PM
wonderful write Carrie congrats on 1st place Shadow x smile
La France Avatar
September 16, 2013 at 2:06 PM
Carrie, congratulations on your first place win in my Fragment Contest, your poem is absolutely stunning, I just loved the emotions in your words, you always manage to capture the essence of what I am seeking, well done, Constance
Mohammed Avatar
September 15, 2013 at 1:30 PM
Your imagery here is delightful and light hearted. I really like this one Carrie. Love always.
Dietrich Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 1:04 AM
wow, I like how you put fragments of news into this so it was like a fragment of a memory based on fragments of news. VEry nicely done and a sure winner.
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