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abandoned beautiful child wandering like a lost leaf all she can do is quiver as rain splinters fall like a river her name was Clara and she has scary thoughts chimera she has "tattered, tangled, tatty" hair with eyes aching she is "hungry, hunched, hurt" a fragment in a chasm abysm "dangerous, dark, daunting" doorways she seeks as a sleeping place frail, gaunt, helpless her spirit is disconnected and broken_ in the morn' dead on the cement . . . ending her torment _________________________ September 12, 2022 Poetry/Verse/FRAGMENT Copyright Protected, ID 09-1486-757-12 All Rights Reserved, 2022, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, 'The A's Have It ' sponsor, Joseph May, Judged 10/02/2022 Fourth Place

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Date: 10/6/2022 7:05:00 AM
A very insightful on about child abuse. Great winner. Congratulations on it being on the winners' list.Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 10/6/2022 7:23:00 AM
Sara, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, Constance
Date: 10/2/2022 5:49:00 AM
A poignant write Constance, Nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/2/2022 6:24:00 AM
Joseph, thank you so much for the inspiration and contest and my placement, and the compliment and congrats, appreciate, Constance
Date: 9/25/2022 2:36:00 PM
So sad. I was trying to find other examples how Joseph wants this done. It's gonna be quite the challenge. oh my!
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Date: 9/25/2022 2:43:00 PM
Andrea, thanks for the visit, yes it is a hard challenge for sure, Constance
Date: 9/12/2022 11:38:00 AM
Painful story sensitively written Constance. Linda
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Date: 9/14/2022 1:05:00 PM
Linda, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, blessings ~
Date: 9/11/2022 10:42:00 PM
I could feel the hurt and pain in this poem. Tragedy is what this is.
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Date: 9/11/2022 10:53:00 PM
Julie, thank you so much for the visit and comment, sadly this is a tragedy that happens too often, blessings ~

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