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Fragile Hearts

FRAGILE HEARTS F alse hope R esides in love for A ll hearts are fragile. G orging on sweet passion’s I llogical obsession with L ove - and loving - E cstasy’s insatiable need. H earts - unable to E ndure the truth A ll hearts are fragile R ecoil at this weakness T remble at loves failing S eeking solace in – love. 10/22/2016

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2016 8:52:00 PM

that is so cool how you made ALL hearts as the fragile ones .Great thinking, John. I just thought of a certain group! Congrats to you.

John Lawless
Date: 10/27/2016 10:12:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I do believe all hearts are fragile and beautiful

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/25/2016 4:42:00 AM

Congrats John, for your placement with this fine piece!!! ;-)

Phillip Garcia

Date: 10/23/2016 10:08:00 PM

Well done John, I found this to be too difficult of an acrostic to write but you handled it with ease- best of luck in the contest. I know the other John will enjoy it as well

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/22/2016 6:36:00 PM

Very good! :)

Casarah Nance

Date: 10/22/2016 5:00:00 PM

A very good acrostic, hearts are very fragile things.

John Lawless
Date: 10/27/2016 10:10:00 PM

Thanks Casarah, I've fallen way behind in my responses.