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Fragile Hearts

Facets, only fragments of me I will let you see, remnants of my life, delicate and broken I keep locked inside, with anguish and sad memories of lost love, I grieve for my love under the cold earth, just a name engraved. Inside me there is a heart, porcelain like glass, so don't come all la-di-da and expect me to just fall in love with you, easily, because I fear losing my heart, again. Heartbroken and vulnerable I stand before you and my, emotions are swirling and twirling within my ailing eggshell soul and running from love is what I do, but I am, ready to love a like-minded man, a kindred spirit, so take this tattered soul and heal it, and take this, shattered heart and hold it in your strong hands, my love. ______________________ October 15, 2016 Acrostic/Free Verse For the contest, Fragile Hearts- Acrostic sponsor, John Hamilton First Place

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Date: 10/27/2016 9:46:00 PM
"...within my ailing eggshell soul" That line alone should have put this one at the top. What a description of the fragile broken heart.
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Date: 10/25/2016 10:40:00 AM
Congrats broken wings it was heartfelt....Seren
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Date: 10/25/2016 8:43:00 AM
I love your use of the "L" la-di-da! A fragile heart made of porcelain must be handled with care! Congrats, Broken Wings!
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Date: 10/25/2016 8:17:00 AM
So heartfelt and beautifully written, Constance, with well-done enjambment in this Acrostic form. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandr
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Date: 10/25/2016 4:20:00 AM
Congrats BW, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest, with this brilliant piece!! ;-)
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Date: 10/25/2016 12:20:00 AM
Wonderfully penned, Constance:) congratulations on your well deserved top win:)
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Date: 10/24/2016 9:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win , Constance :-)Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/24/2016 12:01:00 PM
Heatbroken and vulnerable-perfectly describes your immense pain and suffering. Gl! Balveen
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Date: 10/15/2016 5:45:00 PM
Very good! I bet many can identify with that.
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