Fragile Hearts


Facets, only fragments of me I will let you see,
remnants of my life, delicate and broken I keep locked inside, with
anguish and sad memories of lost love, I
grieve for my love under the cold earth, just a name engraved.
Inside me there is a heart, porcelain like glass, so don't come all
la-di-da and expect me to just fall in love with you,
easily, because I fear losing my heart, again.

Heartbroken and vulnerable I stand before you and my,
emotions are swirling and twirling within my
ailing eggshell soul and running from love is what I do, but I am,
ready to love a like-minded man, a kindred spirit, so
take this tattered soul and heal it, and take this,
shattered heart and hold it in your strong hands, my love.

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October 15, 2016

Acrostic/Free Verse

For the contest, Fragile Hearts- Acrostic
sponsor, John Hamilton

First Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Lawless Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 9:46 PM
"...within my ailing eggshell soul" That line alone should have put this one at the top. What a description of the fragile broken heart.
Roberts Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 10:40 AM
Congrats broken wings it was heartfelt....Seren
Rodrigues Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 8:43 AM
I love your use of the "L" la-di-da! A fragile heart made of porcelain must be handled with care! Congrats, Broken Wings!
Haight Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 8:17 AM
So heartfelt and beautifully written, Constance, with well-done enjambment in this Acrostic form. Congratulations on your First Place win! Hugs, Sandr
Kimathi Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 4:20 AM
Congrats BW, for your well, deserved first placement in the contest, with this brilliant piece!! ;-)
Daniel Avatar
October 25, 2016 at 12:20 AM
Wonderfully penned, Constance:) congratulations on your well deserved top win:)
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 9:49 PM
Congratulations on your win , Constance :-)Hugs Eve
Cheema Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 12:01 PM
Heatbroken and vulnerable-perfectly describes your immense pain and suffering. Gl! Balveen
Sands Avatar
October 15, 2016 at 5:45 PM
Very good! I bet many can identify with that.
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