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Fragile Dreams

Between hours from morn to sundown I drift in a place of nowhere-- and though birdsongs seemingly coo “It’s alright; you are young" frailties leave me wanting each and every move that twines us. These doleful eyes hide away behind a cloud of ebon shades, expressing numbness or is it vulnerability quite undone when melancholia seethes, aimless--- our world, our co-owned pledge disconnecting us from a language now unknown like torn ampersand. I press my hand on a montage and wonder about all possibilities, yet times flit along zones once alive only to bury dreams, unless unless... ```` Your Best Free Verse 2020 Contest For John Hamilton Written 5/19/2020 Re-Submitted 5/24/2020
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Andresen Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 2:27 PM
- Dreams can be so much and it's not always easy to understand them - Dreams are the best therapy for us humans ... and dreams can be fulfilled - Congratulations on your winning poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Mishra Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 1:46 PM
Love the way you have described the possibilities of multiple interpretations in dream verses. Congratulations on your win Nette :)
One Avatar
May 27, 2020 at 6:43 AM
We all now this place as we all drift there, except for night workers.. they are the opposite lol.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
May Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 7:35 AM
Very nicely penned Nette, soupmail
Pandit Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 6:16 AM
Beautifully done as always--in words of jewel.
Ball Avatar
May 19, 2020 at 2:43 AM
A fine piece Nette. Great imagery here. Good luck in the contest. God Bless and stay well, JB
Mcintosh Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 8:04 PM
Such a beautiful expression of poetic ideas and charms. I love it and hope you win, dear friend. Love and blessings sent your way, Gina
Cunningham Avatar
May 18, 2020 at 5:06 PM
Beautifully composed Nette, a winner for sure. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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