Fragile Dance For Two

Inviting you into my heart was both a blessing and a curse did you not think ?
to tell me in less reckless ways you lost yourself in this fragile dance for two 

Inside this tango of passion you dipped then dropped, where was the floor ?
that swallowed me like a Spanish dancer with a Rose between her lips 

Idealistic player that you are we fitted right, so what  sin did I commit?  
Truth be told the only one that I could think of was loving you too much 

Ignoring all your calls I tried to make a life without you in it but why oh why ?
tackling all my dance moves you got me like a Flemish wounded poppet

Indian giver that you are you loved then passed it on, so why was she ?
tangerine lipped & coiffed congealed to your chest like a Minerva Goddess 
 
Ice cream words melted from the heat, castanets clapped & where were you ?
tendencies often nothing more than Paso Doble moves for you, so you slid 

Inside your wealth like a hoof.  A Hexabranchus man, did you not miss?
the little doll you toyed with in Valencia while the festival of fire was going on ! 

August 27 2022
Sponsor	Mark Toney
Contest Name	2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 13
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Ricci Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 3:50 AM
Good Morning Mystic Rose. Hi. As someone who believes in love and dances and all that they stand for I loved your entry. I found this to be well thought out and executed. I very much enjoyed the stanza of ice cream and the metaphor. Thank you for sharing your poetic talent. Have a wonderful day. Blessings always. (smile)
May Avatar
August 31, 2022 at 2:19 AM
The ever changing moves in the dance of love, Wonderful write Vie
Rose  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Indeed in love and life, we have ever changing mods and steps, thanks for reading Joseph
Buehler Avatar
August 29, 2022 at 7:57 PM
This passionate tale of an ill fated tango is conveyed with the most gorgeous images, Rose. It was much enjoyed. Evelyn :)
Rose  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 10:07 AM
Thank you Evelyn for enjoying my poem, and I loved yoru comment God bless
Fowler Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:11 PM
Flamboyant, flammable, and also fragile. Very nicely penned Vie. You're the talent bomb my dear! Linda
Rose  Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:47 PM
So nice to hear from you Linda, thank you for reading my poem and commenting,
M  Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 7:23 AM
A vibrant passionate poem sweet Rose…. Lovely….Debx
Rose  Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 12:46 PM
No matter what age we are we need to keep the fire burning Deb, in life and in poetry, thanks for reading,
Buhagiar Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:54 AM
So vivid a poem. I used to love to tango. Now I'm full of arthritis :)
Rose  Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 7:00 AM
lol me too, sweets, went for a walk with hubby today wore my wooly shawl and shivered, but lucky I love fall and winter, this Montreal girl doesn't cower easy, hugs and butterflies, and things that never die :)
Toluwalope Gideon Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:31 AM
Always in love with your lines. I was lost in thought going through the piece. Much love, Adeniji.
Rose  Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:54 AM
Thank you dear poet for reading my poem today, sending blessings, and wishes of inspiration, always,
Pandit Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 5:35 AM
Cleverly done in "I" and "T"--I liked your theme, Vienna.
Rose  Avatar
August 27, 2022 at 6:54 AM
Thank you for reading my poem dear friend. It was not an easy fiat, but the imagination took care of that lol,
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