Fragile Contest

Strands of tenuous images drift on my mind, as the gas light blinks endlessly with a harlequin moon, squinting around borders of aged, fragile reveries when early origins begin to slowly unfold: And nightfall’s hours plead for replays while I hover in limbo from a spell— that memoirs glide along time’s interludes, outpouring secrecy of my thoughts until hands etch a visual language much like the drama and comedy from life’s decades, between moments of angst and grandeur… a personal legacy nudging me to essay or note down regrets, breakthroughs from an aging heart , making me one, old student in this brittle world: unknowingly, above a court of knighted stars , my frail fingers grasp a pen, now ablaze. Fragile Contest of John Hamilton 10/18/2017
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Barden Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 4:49 PM
This is beautiful, Nette - congratulations on your win! Keep that pen blazing!
Hamilton Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 2:53 PM
Amazing writing Nette you are at the top of your game with this beautiful write. Congrats on a shared number 1, you are in great company on this one!
One Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 5:28 AM
Your vocabulary is awesome and you really know how to put words together. Excellent poem Nette..
Sivey Avatar
October 18, 2017 at 4:58 AM
I just LOVE your last line, "my frail fingers grasp a pen, now ablaze," wow Nette, such power in your words with this write, I am in awe of it's splendor my friend! You have delighted me by the soulful way you have written this incredible poem, such an amazing revival and shattering of ones mind...as we age! I am impressed by your skillful art, and I really enjoyed reading this remarkable piece this morning! What a harmonious write, Great Work!!
Lalion Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 11:22 PM
Very reflective poem ; I like how this ended with such fragile rawness!
Vaso Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 11:01 PM
Again such beautiful imagery, like a painting!
Pandit Avatar
October 17, 2017 at 8:40 PM
Well written,nette..best for a win!
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