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Fragile Contest

Fragile Steps Fragile feet broken-in, glass slippers waltzing through the ballroom. The sweep of a cerulean gown, charming, with angel wings. ~ Broken inside, fatherless, feathers fall around her - weeping. Bullies - dressed like sisters, tango around her tresses. Pulling...teasing, stepmother leading. Ribbons unwound. ~ Her pulse exulting, as the prince whirls her around the room. Jealous fans, fluttering, like eyelashes, in time to the music, unmoved. ~ Scheming scorn of familial-pretense. Sorrowful chores meant to torture and keep her fragile heart inside, as they depart for the Prince’s ball. ~ Her reflection, rare in beauty shines in precious glass of chandelier, as if she, was its magnificent light source. ~ Sitting amidst the cinders, cold wind rinses the ashes from her countenance. A grand dame stands before her. Salutation of wand. ~ Dizzy and drawn out into the lovely gardens, the Prince kisses her tender lips. Impression of charm and lost slipper as midnight comes and goes. ~ She steps breathless into a pumpkin-colored carriage. The grand dame kisses her cheek, “You shall see him again” ~ Furious and frenetic, the “Steps” return, mocking the humble jewel who scrubs their smudges from the floor. ~ Shrieking glass falls as the stepmother’s fortune crashes. For the Prince comes bearing tidings - holding a serendipitous glass slipper. One sister’s feet too long. The other sister’s feet too fat. But Ella’s feet, slide in like butter, and the engagement ring upon her fragile fingers, ensure no one will bully her anymore. ~ The kingdom’s token subjects in that small room, bow their noses to the ground. Fragile minds forfeit their happily ever after. 10/16/2017 Contest: Fragile

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Date: 10/25/2017 5:01:00 PM
Very powerful and thoughtful write, Kim, and I love the form and flow - best wishes and congratulations on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/25/2017 6:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Greg!
Date: 10/18/2017 4:07:00 PM
A fine write Kim, congrats :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/19/2017 5:18:00 AM
Thank you, Gary!
Date: 10/18/2017 3:30:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem Kim, congrats on a fine win!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/18/2017 3:39:00 PM
Thanks so much, John!
Date: 10/17/2017 12:11:00 PM
Cinderella makes a good Halloween story, well done, best wishes in the contest...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie!
Date: 10/17/2017 11:19:00 AM
A delicate story--fragile emotions!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2017 12:13:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay!
Date: 10/17/2017 9:25:00 AM
Nice Narration. Overwhelmed. Love
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 10/17/2017 9:37:00 AM
Thanks, Anisha :)

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