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Rudimentary beings long for scope and meaning. Amort craves instant healing and ambrosian appease, To avoid existence gone in a flash with no intervening, But trading morals for cash results in karmic disease. Amort craves instant healing; ambrosian appeases Acts become rash with no mysticism of consequence. But trading morals for cash results in karmic disease. Leading to squalor and a sojourn of penitence, Acts become rash with no mysticism of consequence. The pursuit of ambition and power becomes the norm. Leading to squalor and a sojourn of penitence, But true sapidity is found in being seraphic and warm. The pursuit of ambition and power becomes the norm. The imperfections of life may compel pain and strife. But true sapidity is found in being seraphic and warm. But they also provide opportunities for growth and life. The imperfections of life may compel pain and strife. Through Quintessence and aroha, we'll find our way, But they also provide opportunities for growth and life. And live a life with purpose and meaning every day. Through Quintessence and aroha, we'll find our way, To avoid existence gone in a flash with no intervening, And live a life with purpose and meaning every day. Rudimentary beings long for scope and meaning.
Written: June 10, 2023

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 6/11/2023 6:17:00 AM
Soto, pantoun poems amaze me. I hink hey are inherently musical…even, for me, feeling something like the movement n musical chairs, butadding the elements instead of remocing a chair (line), This poem feels deeper than many pabtouns as it is more philosophical than just description, Lots to learn & contemplate!
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