Fragile As Raindrop

While  looking  far beyond misty gale
until convulsion of night quavers--
just remember,  in spite  drizzles
new morning salves torment:
I watch those gentle eyes roam
against  a skeletal  frame--
yet, lightness around you glows
more precious than dawn.

Cherishing you this way
soothes  the vicious  gush of hours;
and  that raindrop upon a sallow face
trickles down  onto  a furrowed neck,
defying the tumor of pain its mortal ovation… 
Although brave those eyes are,  white cells 
invade an exhausted gait  like thinning hail.

I watch you smile heroicly at night’s downpour, Mama--
You are beautiful   fragile as the raindrop.



11/20/2018
For Craig Cornish’s The  Raindrop Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 12/15/2018 12:11:00 PM
The raindrop turned into a tear - such a tender loving poem.
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Date: 12/2/2018 1:18:00 AM
A lovely moving poem and tribute to your mother Nette. Congratulations on your fantastic First Place trophy win!
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Date: 11/28/2018 11:33:00 AM
Congratulations nette; your beautiful poem awed me!
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Date: 11/27/2018 8:03:00 PM
This is very powerful, especially the second stanza. Congrats.
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Date: 11/26/2018 11:40:00 AM
I love having clear choices for first place - thanks for making it easy for me
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Date: 11/26/2018 12:42:00 AM
- Congratulations on yours: "The Raindrop" contest poem, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/26/2018 12:01:00 AM
Congrats on your top win, Nette! A powerful poem that is sad and haunting..
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Date: 11/25/2018 9:22:00 PM
Congratulations Nette..so touching..you made us feel the helpless to see our dear ones suffer. very well written and the words prick
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Date: 11/25/2018 7:26:00 PM
Lovely, nette. Congrats on your well deserved gold medal win.
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:47:00 PM
Nicely done, Nette, congratulations on your placement in the contest I enjoyed reading..
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Date: 11/25/2018 6:39:00 PM
Wonderful, Nette. Very touching...Congratulations on your top win...hugs Charlie :)
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Date: 11/25/2018 5:38:00 PM
Beautiful and poignant! Congratulations on your top win, Nette!:-)
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Date: 11/20/2018 4:10:00 PM
The poem is beautiful; the content tugs at our heart strings, especially the end couplet. Your take on the prompted theme is clever and creative. I can see this high on the winners' list. Hugs // paul
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Date: 11/20/2018 12:30:00 PM
- Really deep touching, Nette - Wonderful poem - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/20/2018 8:04:00 AM
It's so sad when we see our loved ones in this way..A poignant write Nette
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Date: 11/20/2018 2:54:00 AM
Very emotional write Nette, another gem from your pen. Tom.
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Date: 11/20/2018 2:22:00 AM
This is so beautiful nette, your words are truly soft raindrops.
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Date: 11/19/2018 5:18:00 PM
Ah, how delicately you write of such tender emotions. I have enjoyed your pen magic tonight, Nette. Be well, hugs
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Date: 11/19/2018 4:55:00 PM
Wow this really reaches the heart Nette. Very nicely written and expressed! :)
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Date: 11/19/2018 4:18:00 PM
This is Beautiful, nette, this poem will stand the test of time, as does all classic poetry
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Date: 11/19/2018 3:49:00 PM
Elegant write..a cherished depiction of love ..delicately rendered. Best for a win, nette.
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Date: 11/19/2018 3:20:00 PM
Love...and that raindrop upon a sallow face and the final two lines. Ifeel the emotion, Nette! Well done!
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Date: 11/19/2018 3:11:00 PM
The reverence and love of your sadly emotional poem touches my heart and soul so very deeply, Nette. Beautifully moving in every way. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/19/2018 3:01:00 PM
A deeply touching and enchantingly beautiful poem Nette. You do have a way with words that so inspires me. Your lines flow effortlessly as raindrops wistfully fall from the skies. Best of luck in the contest
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