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Fragile

fragile wings support agile great blue heron soars summer's long days cease
Inspired by Dr. Ram Mehta's A Great Blue Heron

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 10/6/2014 3:43:00 PM
another beauty - wish I could see that blue heron for real (but I've enjoyed seeing it from your eyes, my friend)
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Date: 10/4/2014 9:12:00 AM
Grace and beauty in every line.
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Date: 10/2/2014 6:12:00 AM
this is very beautiful sara excellent picture
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Date: 10/1/2014 5:12:00 AM
This is lovely Sara. Thank you for the pleasure of this haiku. Hope you are keeping well.
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Date: 9/30/2014 1:14:00 AM
Hello Sara, a most serene vista is revealed here, I am remembering you now, to the One who was, is and is To come, may your days be well..' Joe.
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Date: 9/29/2014 11:29:00 AM
- Lovely haiku, Sara - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/29/2014 10:28:00 AM
a sure winner here, Sara - lovely descriptions
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