Fragile

fragile wings support agile great blue heron soars summer's long days cease Inspired by Dr. Ram Mehta's A Great Blue Heron

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Jack Horne

Date: 10/6/2014 3:43:00 PM

another beauty - wish I could see that blue heron for real (but I've enjoyed seeing it from your eyes, my friend)

Monterey Sirak

Date: 10/4/2014 9:12:00 AM

Grace and beauty in every line.

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 10/2/2014 6:12:00 AM

this is very beautiful sara excellent picture

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 10/1/2014 5:12:00 AM

This is lovely Sara. Thank you for the pleasure of this haiku. Hope you are keeping well.

Joe Maverick

Date: 9/30/2014 1:14:00 AM

Hello Sara, a most serene vista is revealed here, I am remembering you now, to the One who was, is and is To come, may your days be well..' Joe.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/29/2014 11:29:00 AM

- Lovely haiku, Sara - Luck in contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Horne

Date: 9/29/2014 10:28:00 AM

a sure winner here, Sara - lovely descriptions