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Fractured Haiku

Wee old Lady Who
Resides in a tennis shoe
Grandsons live there too

WHEWW!

This is a fractured haiku

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Skat A

June 3, 2015 at 11:59 PM

poor haiku. Enjoyed.. SKAT

Sara Kendrick

December 26, 2012 at 8:41 AM

Just looking at some poems that I put in favs..I got a chuckle again..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

December 8, 2012 at 10:27 PM

Daver, a very good fractured haiku... is this like the nursery rhyme... the old lady and the shoe.. love it...pd

Andrea Dietrich

June 29, 2010 at 8:47 PM

OH, I love this. A bad smelling shoe house. AWesome. And I recall letting my dog Ollyver lick my plate. Then I just set it in the sink to soak before tossing it in the dishwasher! Luv, Andrea

Sara Kendrick

August 19, 2009 at 8:37 AM

Nicely written humor. Thanks for the comments on my Pear Shaped Momma Somewhat. Keep writing. Sara

James Fraser

June 2, 2009 at 2:30 PM

Quirky Haiku Daver, made me chuckle. James

May 23, 2009 at 4:14 PM

Got me chuckling with this one! Thank you for the day brightener. Keep on writing! Have a wonderful weekend. Karen

Kristin Reynolds

May 21, 2009 at 3:20 AM

EEK! I can smell it from here! not pretty. she netter get out her whacking stick and kick all those boys out. go get a job, young'un! lol you are so cute. love, Kristin