Fracture

I've seen beautiful before.
I've seen you on the inside a time or two,
a nice place to live that I guess no one can afford.
  
Today I see this little world from a different light..
(Cliche, I know)
maybe it is just an angle that differs?
Or maybe it is a concussion.
A fracture to the infrastructure of my existence,
my head or my heart?
I don't know which one.
  
Colors and objects standing still only mock me,
like they have more of a right to be here than I do.
And the particles and knots of wood and stone that stretch around my head 
tell me that they know more than I do.
Am I really nothing like they say?
Tip-toeing around,
my movement only complicates things...
I'm fractured.
Please tell your demons to stop mocking me?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 7/3/2016 12:46:00 AM
Cassandra Howell, enjoyed reading your poem, thank you for sharing your thoughts through words. *SKAT*
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Date: 12/26/2012 4:54:00 PM
I stumbled across what you wrote today and now your words have really tripped me. I would like to see what else you got. Put it on please. I can tell you have been writing for a long time. God gives us talents and if we don't use it to raech others then its wasted. But I abuse mine all the time so, The last line got my attention. Yes I know about them.
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Date: 11/28/2012 2:47:00 AM
Cassandra a big welcome to the soup, very good write you have here, well done and keep writing...David
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:37:00 AM
This is where a true poet writes from... well done... hugs Michael
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Date: 11/15/2012 12:19:00 AM
Cassandra nice work.
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Date: 11/14/2012 3:57:00 PM
Very well written and coming from the bottom of your heart. This is a good read - JH
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Date: 11/14/2012 8:17:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer you Cassandra. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/13/2012 9:48:00 PM
you spoke from your heart and soul.. Love you hun.. Keep it flowing out.. Check me out and see what you think..
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Date: 11/13/2012 1:04:00 PM
Welcome to P-Soup - You're good at writing poetry, I like your poem. - Hope you will get much pleasure to share your poems here with us. - (To get comments, you must give back comments) - Looking forward to reading more in the future. - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/13/2012 10:33:00 AM
Really nice write.
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