Foxhound Pup - Nursery Rhyme

I frowned when I found my new pup was gone, so, I searched all around for my little foxhound, listening with profound intensity until dawn. I was gowned but changed; headed to the pound, in the eastbound lane that would take me there. I yelled to expound, '"There's no time to spare!" Traffic moved slowly, so I found a way round it, now westbound, my nerves were coiled and wound. I stopped at a campground and called his name, "Jit!" I heard no barks or mewling. Not a single sound. Pup, where are you? Hiding behind a hill or mound? Did you dig holes in the ground, earthy and browned? Pup, if you're lost, in salty tears I would be drowned. Fears abound that I would never see his face again. My spirits low, not much further can they be downed. I heard, "Woof!" and my heart beat in quick refrain... Quickly, Jit ran to me, faster than a racing greyhound! All this time he'd been asleep in my car's backseat. My pup continues to astound me with kisses so sweet. He follows me everywhere, hoping for a doggie treat! ~ April 26, 2022 ~ Nursery Rhyme 3 Contest Sponsored by Eve Roper

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Date: 5/25/2022 10:05:00 AM
I am so glad "All this time he'd been asleep in my car's backseat." So terribly glad! Congratulations!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/25/2022 10:09:00 AM
It had to have a happy ending. Thanks, Caren.
Date: 5/5/2022 12:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Soooooooo sweet. Love the last line. Give him a doggie treat from me. Have a blessed day..............
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Date: 5/3/2022 4:10:00 AM
Great pup and beautiful rhyme on him. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/3/2022 2:13:00 AM
Awesome! I do love the puppy theme, congratulations on your win!!
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Date: 5/2/2022 7:02:00 PM
Such a heartfelt poem, Jenna, congratulations on your win. Blessings my friend
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/2/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thank you, Eve.
Date: 5/1/2022 1:36:00 PM
SO SWEET. so far, I see you are the only other person who used hound to write their theme as a dog.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 5/2/2022 8:22:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea.
Date: 4/26/2022 10:21:00 AM
A lovely story Jenna with a very happy ending. Hope you had a lovely cruise. Greetings from Turkey. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 4/26/2022 10:29:00 AM
It was a nice getaway, Tom... 12 foot swells sailing home, but it cleared the decks of most people. I enjoyed being rocked to sleep. Thanks for the Turkey greetings! Have fun.
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