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[This is a TRIONET, a new poetry form I formulated, which combines the traditional triolet with the fourteen lines of a traditional sonnet. The rhyme scheme is ABaAabAB  AAABBb]

Watching fireworks burst in the sky tonight, Performing incredibly awesome displays Of streamers red, blue, yellow, and white. Watching fireworks burst in the sky tonight All the villagers will stop to watch the sight, While a popular patriotic anthem plays. Watching fireworks burst in the sky tonight Performing incredibly awesome displays. All the villagers will stop to watch the sight Of streamers red, blue, yellow, and white, Watching fireworks burst in the sky tonight. Performing incredibly awesome displays While a popular patriotic anthem plays The beginning of many summer holidays.
Written July 4, 2021

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Date: 7/4/2021 11:55:00 PM
Everybody loves fireworks. So beautiful. Nicely penned Milton. God Bless, JB
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/5/2021 8:34:00 AM
Thanks, JB. I'm glad you enjoyed and I hope you saw some exciting fireworks over the Fourth of July.

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