Four Words

four words

Come closer let our hearts beat together,
Close your eyes and let us fade away forever,
Let our bodies lie close like hands when in pray,
let us stay like this, until our dying day,
let me whisper four words, let them echo together,
Those four words, i love you forever.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Andresen Avatar
August 2, 2012 at 4:17 AM
So sweet and lovely written poem, like it Jack. - oxox Anne-Lise :)
Williams Avatar
August 1, 2012 at 3:25 PM
Jack, very romantic..I like ..David
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