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04/06/16

Third Place 

Seasons Comtest by Shadow Hamilton

Four Seasons

SEASONAL 

                        Spring, The King of seasons to bring
                        leaves glowing, glistening, glittering,
                     blushing blooming buds, cheery chirping birds.
                    Cooing dove making love with care and regards.
                          My forgotten past is whispering.

                  Summer shows grammar of heat getting warm and warmer.
                     Sowing seasonal seeds to harvest, busy is farmer.
                           Sharp scorching Sun dazzles shiny
                            Sometimes stormy days go rainy.              .
                        My forgotten past starts to murmur.

                     Autumn! Trees always feel glad to welcome.
                      Leaves tend to fall as Fall has come.
                            Plants are eager to get rid of
                           drooped dry dying leaves shedding off,
                       Pricking reminiscence, I wish to overcome.

                       Winter is entering slowly shyly aftermath,
                     with cool and cooler temperature on frosty path.
                    Cold climate is getting composed in snowy effort.
                           Chilled weather claims woolen comfort.
                        My forgotten past is seeking a little warmth. 


  
                                                                      

    
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Kimathi Avatar
April 12, 2016 at 8:37 AM
I love the color and tone of your verses, which bring the picture of the four seasons to life in our thoughts!! Congrats Anisha, for your placement in the contest!!! ;-)
A   Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:10 PM
Anisha, Congrats in "Shadow Hamilton's Season, Contest." ~LINDA~
Dutta Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Thanks Linda
Johnson Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 9:24 PM
Congratulations on a nice win. Love, Joyce
Dutta Avatar
April 10, 2016 at 11:30 PM
Thanks Joyce. Love. Anisha
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 6:59 PM
I love the way you have personalized the seasons with your own feelings in the last lines of each stanza. Your use of alliteration is also exceptional Anisha. Congratulations on your beautiful winnng entry! #7 ; )
Hamilton Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 4:34 PM
vibrant poem that sings Anisha congrats on 3rd place hugs
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2016 at 3:10 PM
beautiful imagery many congrats on your win Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx
La France Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 4:53 PM
Abisha, very nice for the contest, best of luck and I am loving this 7 ~
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