Jaycee Cervenka Poet Alliteration

Four Men At Sea

Fiddlely Fee
Four men at sea
Floundering outside the bay
Fairily Fun 
Feasting on sun
Feeling the heat of its rays

Fodiddly doo
Funny smelling goo
Fixed to the bottom of their feet.
Fabiliby fape
Fishy smelling grapes
Fermenting in the baking hot heat.

Fibity swish
Five little fish
Fixing to nibble on toeses
Fee fiddle desh
Foul tasting flesh 
For sure had them wrinkling their noses.

Fie fiddlely fee
Four sailors out at sea
Fast sinking they started to drown
Fudely gay
Forewarned were they
Frolic out on solid ground.

9/2/2004

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Funom Makama April 14, 2015 at 10:00 AM discrete, lovely, incisive, well crafted and beautifully portrayed. I am happy to come across this wonderful piece.... Jaycee Cervenka April 15, 2015 at 9:35 AM This was actually a fun piece to write. A bit of silliness thrown in with the cautions of partying too much on the water. Thank you for the comment. ~Jan

Jan Allison April 1, 2015 at 5:11 PM love the made up words in this fabulous fun write :-) Hugs Jan xx Jaycee Cervenka April 1, 2015 at 6:17 PM This is just a bit of silliness for April Fool's Day.