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Four Deer

four deer amble across my path on a city street. . . an unnatural natural sighting Written 2/25/16 for the Fragment Of Life Contest of Broken Wings *Note: This happened to me just this week. There is something so fascinating to me about such a simple thing. My kids always got so excited to see this kind of thing too.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/15/2016 10:56:00 AM

Andrea, Congrats on your "Fragment Of Life" win. Luv ~LINDA~

Sarita Milliner

Date: 3/12/2016 10:13:00 AM

Congratulations on your win!

Mark Peterson

Date: 3/10/2016 12:27:00 PM

A clever little write and tasty little twist on turn of phrase. Congrats on top placement.

Rizwana Bhurani

Date: 3/9/2016 8:31:00 PM

Congratulations......smiles

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/9/2016 8:16:00 AM

Congratulations, well done!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/8/2016 10:05:00 PM

What a delightful poem dear Andrea.. congrats on top podium.

Stephen Pennell

Date: 3/8/2016 1:18:00 PM

I can understand see a badger or a fox kingfisher get a buzz well won congrats

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/8/2016 1:16:00 PM

Congratulations on your win wit this delightful poem. I can visualize them. ; )

Joseph May

Date: 3/8/2016 12:54:00 PM

Congrats on your winning write

Probir Gupta

Date: 3/8/2016 7:55:00 AM

Lovely reality. Congrats....

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 3/8/2016 6:37:00 AM

I can imagine how it was an amazing site!!! In Kenya, sometimes we come across elephants.... Well, congrats Andrea, for your amazing top placement in the contest!!! ;-)

Susan Gentry

Date: 3/7/2016 11:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win! I find it fascinating also. Good job and excellent idea. :)

Hija De La Luna

Date: 3/7/2016 9:52:00 PM

What a wonderful encounter you had, Andrea! And I like the form that you used for this. I see that this is a top win for a contest, too! Congratulations!!

Edward Ebbs

Date: 3/7/2016 9:12:00 PM

Hey there Andrea, congrats on your win!

Sam Jameson

Date: 3/7/2016 2:04:00 PM

I like this one, Andrea..I think it's the simplicity of the event yet the words convey a distinctive account-- very easy to put myself in your place when read. Nice write..and congrats on the placement!

Eve Roper

Date: 3/7/2016 12:38:00 PM

Andrea,congratulations on the “Fragment Of Life” contest a 7: ) Hugs Eve

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 3/7/2016 12:06:00 PM

Congratulations Andrea on your win

Jan Allison

Date: 3/7/2016 11:37:00 AM

Oh how wonderful Andrea it must have been a lovely sight:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/7/2016 11:02:00 AM

Naturally I enjoyed this unnatural natural tanka, Andrea:) No chance of that happening in Malta...we don't have any deer here:( Congratulations on placing first! // paul

Sandra Haight

Date: 3/7/2016 10:33:00 AM

A perfect 'fragment of life', Andrea. Unfortunately, we see this too often lately...Love how you did this, and congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/7/2016 9:53:00 AM

Last week I was happily surprised to see two deer at the bottom of our driveway,.....happy that is, until I realized they had nibbled our poor struggling little pear tree !! They weren't at all afraid of me, as I walked closer. (Later saw the same two eating flowers near the front porch of a neighbor's house! I love seeing these kind of things!! Cute poem!

Lu Loo

Date: 3/7/2016 8:16:00 AM

Andrea, this is a true story?!? That's amazing! Congrats on your placement in the contest! :)-luloo *smiles*

Funom Makama

Date: 3/5/2016 11:12:00 AM

Wonderful! Wonderful! So so so wonderful....

Jennifer Walker

Date: 3/3/2016 7:24:00 AM

I love seeing deer but not when they are eating my tulips. Great Tanka sis.

Daver Austin

Date: 2/27/2016 11:52:00 AM

Tanka very much for this fine 5-liner. Love, daver