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Four Cups of Wine

Four cups of wine Fruit of the vine Sounds like a mighty fine time Truth be told, it's drunk late at night with kids up and cranky It's not my idea of a delight Many heads will be spinning for hours on end And then the very next night ~ It's the same thing again

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Date: 4/11/2023 9:20:00 AM
ooh gw. A repetitive pattern to no good end? I laugh a little, and empathize a lot. :) laf
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Date: 4/8/2023 1:56:00 PM
A cute write. Guess the party is at your house. I did not get my invitation. Hahaha....  "Happy Easter" with blessings...................
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/9/2023 7:02:00 PM
I must have written it to either Paula Goldberg or Paula Silversmith. ~ Senioritis Stricken
Date: 4/8/2023 5:40:00 AM
Love this one GW!!! Happy Passover!!!!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/9/2023 7:02:00 PM
Thanks, Mike. Happy Easter to you! :) gw
Date: 4/5/2023 12:14:00 PM
Enjoyed reading this one today. Good warning for those who indulge in too much drink or too frequently in the cup. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
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Date: 4/5/2023 10:48:00 AM
..give it to the kids it might quiet them down....
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Date: 4/5/2023 8:04:00 AM
Not a wine drinker myself…enjoyed this poem Big Bad!! Debx
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:56:00 AM
Have a great time, Gershon. Have some Mahror for me!)) Gut Yom Tov Pangie
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Date: 4/5/2023 7:55:00 AM
The only thing alcohol does is to cut off one's emotions. When you become sober, they pick up right where they left off. A subject that should be written about more (IMO) Nice job, GW!
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