Foundation

“...we achieve true wholeness by embracing our fragility...” Jalaja Bonheim i had no script no actors no stage instead let me direct this life my life stage the words add a subtle dramatic tone with fragility once the foundation is built i'll work on emotional recall work in the layers does it sing does it dance does it make you think does it make you feel you can design the most beautiful building in the world but with no structure it will not stand for this one i start with the word "I" yup that’s a keeper next go out on a limb "Love" it can't be all about me so i finish with "You" yes you ‘what happens when you open your heart?, your inner strength becomes an outer foundation.’
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Pinet Avatar
May 17, 2017 at 2:52 PM
A marvelous display of emotions as one is led upon a trail of tragic moments, that led us to love. Emile. #7
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 12, 2016 at 5:58 PM
Hello Maurice,this poem is beautiful.I like the way the words flow together. I sense this poem to be romantic. Because that is how I felt this poem to be. A wonderful poem you wrote.
Richards Avatar
November 14, 2016 at 8:34 PM
You have the most wonderful voice to compliment this deep and meaningful poem !! Well done !!! This is compelling!
Callus Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 4:20 PM
You 'build' solidly with three winning words, Armand..."I_Love_You"!! May you also find enough love to make your life happy and meaningful. ~ Regards // paul
Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Thank you Paul. Lots Of Love, armand.
Salehi Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 9:54 AM
I love you too....very nice
Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 10:13 AM
Thank you, such an incredible comment from you. A Ton of Love always, armand.
Vaso Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 10:11 PM
I have to say "I DO" love this poem!
Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 10:12 AM
I do...love you my dear friend.
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:24 PM
sorry I took so long to see this one, by the way. I get so busy with life. Finally catching up on comments and got to YOURS which always are so sweet, and finally got to see this gem!
Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 10:14 AM
Thank you, your comments are important to me.
Dietrich Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 8:23 PM
OH WOW, ARmand. I LOVE THIS!!! Was listening to your voice and wondering what was this big poem you were building the foundation for. Got to the end, and the ending was simply I love you. Simple yet so human. That is how you are. And also you can write complicated and do it SO WELL. a huge FAVE for me!!!!
Yvonne Avatar
November 12, 2016 at 10:11 AM
I do...lots of love.
Austin Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 9:39 AM
This is such a clever layout, Maurice. You are a true original. Love, daver
Yvonne Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 4:20 PM
You are one of my favourite poets, my dear friend. I don't touch your coattail. I hope poets who see this comment will take the time to click your name and visit your amazing poetry.
Onclaud Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 2:35 PM
what a heartwarming gush of emotion, armarnd... i am swooning!..huggs
Yvonne Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 3:17 PM
Thank you nette lots of love my friend armand.
B. Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 1:23 PM
Pure magic! The delivery touches my very core. A very touching and beautiful piece. Love it, It's a definite fav.
Yvonne Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 1:26 PM
Thank you, all my love armand.
Smith Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 12:22 PM
Thank you : )
Yvonne Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Your welcome...love you lots.
Y. Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 11:52 AM
Hi Armand, I enjoyed the way you crafted this write. I loved this piece and your amazing pen as well. A Big seven: -) Alexis
Yvonne Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 11:55 AM
Thank you Alexis. Lots Of Love always, armand.
Sands Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 11:45 AM
So well done! Very special Maurice! :)
Yvonne Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Heidi...it was heartfelt. Lots Of Love, armand.
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