Found

He had glaring cold blue eyes
That I knew I was going to miss
Some blues are clear and so alive
But none compare to his

I could not read his like a book
I was blocked off by a wall
Maybe it was my heart he took
I could not read him at all

I tried to find things I could look to
When he was not around
I searched and searched and for so long
Those colors were unfound

I have stared out at the ocean
From both under and above
Those swirling shades of denims, jades
Were not the blue I loved

I silenced all my hopes again
And locked them in my closet
I watched, entranced, as water ran
From every rusty faucet

And the ocean I returned to
Hoping colors changed with days
Greener hues and darker blues
No, it all felt like it was grey

Then I finally looked up from the sea
Directly to the sky
Recognition dawned on me
I found my heaven for the first time

Feathered all across the blue
Were cotton candy clouds
I took so long to look and look
But his eyes have now been found

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Date: 10/12/2016 2:08:00 PM
- Anna, welcome to Poetry Soup with your great first poem - // Sun :)
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Date: 10/7/2016 11:40:00 PM
Anna, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Date: 10/5/2016 8:38:00 AM
Anna, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/5/2016 8:58:00 AM
Thank you for taking the time to comment! I appreciate it. I would love constructive criticism, and I will definitely check out your poems. :)
Date: 10/5/2016 7:35:00 AM
Welcome to Poerty Soup. Good entry with a nice poem. Hope u will enjoy PS very much. Keep on writing..........//:) with love
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Date: 10/5/2016 8:57:00 AM
thank you :)
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