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Fostering a Reign of Peace

How easy it is to get wrapped up In our own little universe The cocoon of the daily grind Of going about our business Trying to protect our turf ‘Cause we’re more fragile than we let on We live in fear that aggressors surround us Propelling us to not forget and not forgive Yet when we step back and Focus on the meaning of our life On the direction we want to take And the legacy we’ll leave behind We do want to be kinder and Contribute to a better world Not just for us but for mankind In the end we’ll face our Maker Standing alone solely accountable For our deeds and misdeeds Responsible for our own journey For how we cultivated our heart And the goodwill we did impart When tallied will we have done enough Or will we be asking for forgiveness For barely meeting a passing grade With this in mind and while it’s not too late Let’s all take stock of what’s in our heart All start practicing forgiveness And letting go of the past as we realize To forgive is to set ourselves free AP: 3rd place 2025 Submitted on November 3, 2018 for contest SOMEONE FORGIVEN YOU: WHEN IS THE LAST TIME YOU'VE FORGIVEN DRAMATIC VERSE sponsored by JAMES EDWARD LEE SR - RANKED 4TH

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Date: 11/3/2018 10:07:00 PM
Yes!! The two most productive words in the English language --- "I'm sorry." As you put it, 'letting go' is the key. Nicely done, Line. ~ Gershon
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Date: 11/4/2018 8:27:00 AM
Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment, Gershon.
Date: 11/3/2018 10:02:00 PM
Good advice for us all. I tell myself I am not perfect and will never be. We cannot begin to understand the depths of God's mercy so I do my best and trust God.
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Date: 11/4/2018 8:28:00 AM
You've got it all figured out, Timothy. Thank you for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 11/3/2018 3:52:00 PM
Your first stanza really resonates with anyone who's spent any time in the workplace, and the rest is just uplifting. Very well-penned, Line, and a pleasure to read.
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Date: 11/3/2018 4:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Bernard. Most appreciated.

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