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In a lattice-lit dorm room sits a writer. A discarded chemistry book lies beside her. because ideas are hitting off her, like a collider. Why does writing make her feel alive-er? Cause it helps sort out the feelings inside her? Repose is something grinding-study denies her. Now, rhyming isn't her primary desire the connections form, almost, despite her poetry’s at it best when it comes unaware “Oh,” she thinks, like we’re going there? What she writes might eventually be shared with that awareness she vowels with care picking words when they seem the ripest shaping phrases like some sort of stylist she may be less of a poet than a typist Her default is to narrative - like you read in novels cause let’s face it - cold-poetry is as dead as vaudeville, as buried as silent movies, letters and opera, have I come to dig up Caesar, like a fossil? . . cold = straight up

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Date: 3/28/2024 2:34:00 AM
OMG is my writing cold and dead as vaudeville? I guess I will be buried with my words…
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Anais Vionet
Date: 3/28/2024 5:02:00 PM
No, there are a few who still watch Chaplin and hear Pavarotti. Once you’re on the Internet - all your mistakes live forever =]
Date: 3/27/2024 8:40:00 PM
Dear Anais,Your poem beautifully captures the creative process, the writer's struggle, and the essence of poetry itself. The imagery of a lattice-lit dorm room and the discarded chemistry book beside you sets the scene for a journey of self-discovery through writing. I love how your words convey a sense of authenticity and introspection of the power of expression and the beauty of crafting narratives. Keep digging up those fossils of creativity and sharing your unique voice with the world. - Blessings, Daniel
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Anais Vionet
Date: 3/28/2024 5:24:00 PM
Thanks DHR, you make the most wonderful comments =]

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