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fossils

In a lattice-lit dorm room sits a writer.
A discarded chemistry book lies beside her.
because ideas are hitting off her, like a collider.

Why does writing make her feel alive-er?
Cause it helps sort out the feelings inside her?

Repose is something grinding-study denies her.

Now, rhyming isn't her primary desire
the connections form, almost, despite her
poetry’s at it best when it comes unaware
“Oh,” she thinks, like we’re going there?

What she writes might eventually be shared
with that awareness she vowels with care
picking words when they seem the ripest
shaping phrases like some sort of stylist
she may be less of a poet than a typist

Her default is to narrative - like you read in novels
cause let’s face it - cold-poetry is as dead as vaudeville,
as buried as silent movies, letters and opera,
have I come to dig up Caesar, like a fossil?
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cold = straight up
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Gondolf Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 2:34 AM
OMG is my writing cold and dead as vaudeville? I guess I will be buried with my words…
Vionet Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 5:02 PM
No, there are a few who still watch Chaplin and hear Pavarotti. Once you’re on the Internet - all your mistakes live forever =]
Rodgers Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 8:40 PM
Dear Anais,Your poem beautifully captures the creative process, the writer's struggle, and the essence of poetry itself. The imagery of a lattice-lit dorm room and the discarded chemistry book beside you sets the scene for a journey of self-discovery through writing. I love how your words convey a sense of authenticity and introspection of the power of expression and the beauty of crafting narratives. Keep digging up those fossils of creativity and sharing your unique voice with the world. - Blessings, Daniel
Vionet Avatar
March 28, 2024 at 5:24 PM
Thanks DHR, you make the most wonderful comments =]
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